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Old 10-10-2009, 04:57 AM

I act so cheerful,
When I’m really not,

You don’t know me,
I don’t think you will ever

If you knew who I was you’d know
I am just pretending

Do I even know?
Who I am anymore

After all this pretending,
It’s hard to tell

But I will figure it out,
After a while I will not be able to pretend anymore.

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Old 10-10-2009, 05:01 AM

Oh yeah, this was touching. And even if it is short, it got to the point. Nice usage of free verse.

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Old 10-10-2009, 05:04 AM

Thank you

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Old 10-10-2009, 11:51 PM

Emo Cupcake, I've gone ahead and moved your thread into the Poetry subforum. Please update this topic with all your new poetry pieces. :yes:

 


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