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aq_aria 10-11-2009 09:54 PM

My Poem Thread
 
So, I'm will post poetry and I guess you guys tell me your honest opinion. Nothing's too harsh.

First Poem:Haiku
Seasons
The seasons of change
The sweet songs of harmony
Pass before my eyes


aq_aria 10-12-2009 12:41 AM

There was a kid with the flu,
So much did he sneeze and it's true.
He slept and and he ate,
it was great,
because he still had some howework to do.

Limerick


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