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Old 11-12-2009, 07:44 AM

Here is one to brighten up any day.

Do You Believe?
By:me

Do you believe in fantsies?
Where all your dreams come true,
Do you believe in fairy tales?
Where the sky is baby blue,
Do you believe in miracles?
Where wonderful things happen,
Do you believe in heroes?
Like in Sleeping Beauty and Aladdin.
Cause if you do, you're perfectly normal,
And if you don't, that's okay.
These are only dreams, wishes, and thoughts,
To brighten up a gloomy day.


Hope you all enjoy.

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Old 11-12-2009, 08:12 AM

Nice!
Very light and full of fantasy :)

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Old 11-12-2009, 10:45 AM

Thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it. I want to write enough to make a book I already have the title picked out and everything.

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Old 11-13-2009, 10:52 AM

Aww, what a beautiful piece!
It flows wonderfully and is a refreshing change from a lot of 'darker' amateur poetry!

 


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