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Old 11-20-2009, 04:04 AM

1.You and Your Wings

Beneath the weight of sorrow-ridden tears
Left uncried inside my soul,
I feel the weight of many years
Begging me to just let go,
Inside the familiar, velvet dark
I feel at home within the cold,
I wrap it around me like a shield
When even my own words get old,
Beyond the rarity of my smile
There lies a piece of my heart,
Covered in the debris of time
Waiting to be torn apart,
Pain is all I have ever known,
Until your smile made me ask,"Why?"
I had been stranded in the ashes
Until your wings taught me to fly.




2.The Story Noone Knows

Today I took time to think,
Stepped back and watched my memories,
Some I held closely and others I let go.

I listened to my heart awhile,
Listened to the story,
The story noone knows.

I paused to let the wind blow by,
Let it mess up my hair,
And I let out a weary sigh.

I felt everything around me stir,
And for once I didn't hold back,
As the bitter, salty tears fell from my eyes.

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Old 11-27-2009, 06:46 AM

Wonderful! I love both of them. I can totally relate to both. I love the metaphors and titles. Keep up the great work!:)

 



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