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Old 11-28-2009, 01:04 AM

~*~Come one, come all~*~

Welcome to my poetry thread. I'll be posting here whenever I feel like writing something new. My first posts will be old poems I wrote. Most of my stuff is dark and depressing since I usually write when I feel like that but I do have the occasional happy poem.

Somethings you need to remember to follow:
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~ Poetry Subforum Rules
Break one of these rules in my thread I will report you.


I encourage critics as well as interpretations of what I write. I hope you enjoy!


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Old 11-28-2009, 01:36 AM

~*~My Poems~*~

Instead of putting a new post at the end of my thread I'll update this post as a list of my poems so other don't have to look through th thread for them.

Yin Yang
Yin
Moon, Material forms
Completing, Freezing, Darkening
Submission, Female,
Male, Dominance
Creating, Heating, Lighting
Sun, Heaven
Yang


Shadow Tears
I try to cry
I try and try
The feelings are there
But my eyes are bare

I lost someone close to me
I watched their soul go free
As their life slipped by
All of my tears were dry

Through my fingers ran their blood
I just sat their like a dud
I crawled in a corner, eyes wide
Waiting for tears like high tide

Sitting in the corner, hidden by shadows
Bathing in regrets and sorrows
I sat there wanting to die
For all that happened I could not cry

My life went bleak
A tear ran down my cheek
As they sat so near
They stole my tear

They felt my pain
As my tears fell like rain
Surrounded by darkness
I no longer saw the carcass

They took me away
On my lonely day
Forgetting would leave me empty
Remembering just cannot be

They took my sorrows
Those fiends, those shadows
As I wandered their world
Emotions no longer caroled

Black water filled the abyss
Rain drops gentle as a kiss
Floating in the water until I drown
Never hearing another sound

At the bottom is where I now lie
Waiting until it is my turn to die


I'll Wait Forever

I'll wait forever
For someone that can follow me
Someone who understands
The only one who will know every bit and piece of me
I'll wait forever
For someone to see past this mask
Someone who will catch me before I lose my grip
The only one who won't run from any aspect
I'll wait forever
Beit this life time or the next
Someone will find me
Time doesn't exist, because
I'll wait forever


You Promised Me

You promised you wouldn't leave me
With me you'd always be
But you couldn't foresee
The accident to be

That promise keeps me here
As I wait for you dear
You reached me with fear

Yelling "Don't leave me please!"
"I'm always with you gees."

You kept your promise to me



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Old 11-28-2009, 01:37 AM

Reserved in case I need it for something

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Old 11-28-2009, 01:44 AM

I loved the diamante poem, Yami-chan! It was beautiful and captured an essence I had not thought of when i wrote mine a long time ago...

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Old 11-28-2009, 01:45 AM

diamante poem? I don't know types I just write how I feel like writing >.>

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Old 11-28-2009, 04:17 AM

These are very good. I believe poetry is all about expression and you've down just that. :D

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Old 11-28-2009, 01:42 PM

I like poetry, I believe everyone should write, even if they don't know much about poetry. Writing helps clear the mind.

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Old 12-04-2009, 02:14 AM

It really does! If I don't upstage you, could I upload my own poem, it's like a sorta happy poem :P

 


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