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My poems Corner
I hate when the Sun shines
for all but me. I hate when your heart beats for her, not me. I hate the darkness with hopeful voice I say, as shadows close in ''Come what may'' |
You can turn of the light
and still I will see. You can burn all the bridges You can shoot me down, I will stand up and be proud. You can throw a punch You can tear me down, I will stand up and still be proud. I know you hate me I know you do, You can do voodoo but either way you can't hurt me because unlike you I have hope |
I really love your style and how you're succinct with your writing.
You have great way of really driving the point home and getting your feelings across. Please keep up the good work! |
thank you.You may read in near future style that is not seen and that is me and only me.thank you for the support
---------- See all the green in the world around. I see the red that is on the ground. See the sapphire blue See the cold ice I see the light and it is so bright. I see the envy I see jealousy I see blood. In this colorful world it would be nice to see white,grey,black |
I've gone ahead and moved this into our Poetry subforum. :yes:
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You're very welcome. The newest poem is lovely. Sometimes it would be nice to see things with naivety, not noticing their true colors but accepting them at face value. Reality can be harsh, can't it? |
that is what I am aiming for.To show the harsh reality.
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I see the deep
I see dark abyss I see new dawn coming. In the dark there is always light. There is always sound You cannot hit the ground. Like Alice in that hole chasing rabbit. |
Sea splashing, Earth shaking, Fire breathing, is it maybe Global Warming |
Fluttering bumblebees,
green grass grows. Spring time is coming and I feel so warm. My heart is warm it beats faster then usual, Sun bring happiness into a dim lit room. |
all so pretty
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thank you hunni :D
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