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Rose Pearl 02-21-2010 04:53 PM

My poems Corner
 
I hate when the Sun shines
for all but me.
I hate when your heart beats
for her, not me.

I hate the darkness
with hopeful voice I say,
as shadows close in
''Come what may''

Rose Pearl 02-22-2010 06:14 PM

You can turn of the light
and still I will see.
You can burn all the bridges
You can shoot me down,
I will stand up and be proud.

You can throw a punch
You can tear me down,
I will stand up and still be proud.

I know you hate me
I know you do,
You can do voodoo
but either way you can't hurt me
because unlike you
I have hope

bethedmundsguthrie 02-24-2010 07:40 PM

I really love your style and how you're succinct with your writing.
You have great way of really driving the point home and getting your feelings across.
Please keep up the good work!

Rose Pearl 02-24-2010 11:40 PM

thank you.You may read in near future style that is not seen and that is me and only me.thank you for the support

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See all the green
in the world around.
I see the red
that is on the ground.
See the sapphire blue
See the cold ice
I see the light
and it is so bright.

I see the envy
I see jealousy
I see blood.


In this colorful world
it would be nice to see white,grey,black

Knerd 02-25-2010 12:07 AM

I've gone ahead and moved this into our Poetry subforum. :yes:

bethedmundsguthrie 02-25-2010 12:31 AM

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Originally Posted by Rose Pearl (Post 1766644705)
thank you.You may read in near future style that is not seen and that is me and only me.thank you for the support

I certainly hope so!
You're very welcome.

The newest poem is lovely. Sometimes it would be nice to see things with naivety, not noticing their true colors but accepting them at face value. Reality can be harsh, can't it?

Rose Pearl 02-25-2010 11:00 AM

that is what I am aiming for.To show the harsh reality.

Rose Pearl 02-25-2010 10:02 PM

I see the deep
I see dark abyss
I see new dawn coming.
In the dark
there is always light.
There is always sound
You cannot hit the ground.
Like Alice in that hole
chasing rabbit.

Rose Pearl 03-04-2010 08:38 PM

Sea splashing,
Earth shaking,
Fire breathing,
is it maybe
Global Warming

Rose Pearl 08-07-2013 07:34 PM

Fluttering bumblebees,
green grass grows.
Spring time is coming
and I feel so warm.

My heart is warm
it beats faster then usual,
Sun bring happiness
into a dim lit room.

LadyDesi 08-08-2013 12:26 PM

all so pretty

Rose Pearl 08-10-2013 07:20 AM

thank you hunni :D


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