I would like some critiques on my latest little piece. :) Have at it.

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Crystal eyes of midnight fury;
heartbeats quicken with growing worry.
His white teeth sharper then any blade;
her bloodshot eyes leave her betrayed.

Her mind wonders the unknown;
her deepest fear to be alone.
She wishes time could heal her pain;
his love to her is like cocaine.

His skin so cold;
his strength untold.
He runs by the moon;
To sleep, immune.

Blood a sweet crimson;
his lips laced with poison.
The one she admires;
my love, my vampire.

It's so vivid! I like it lots. I kinda want to know more of their story, to be honest. What happens?! Does he turn her into a vampire or just kill her?