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Old 03-07-2010, 09:26 AM

in an act
of sheer desperation,
i clasp my hands
around the locket
that held you
and me together

and it crumbles
and the remnants
fall upon my dirty shoes -




just as a little explanation here.
I wrote this about a guy, obviously, who broke my heart and kind of sodded off without warning. and I smothered him. I think?
I don't know. xD
Anyhow. I'm not awesome at writing structured poetry.
Better at open verse..

Um!
Comments? opinions?
Thank youuuu. :3

 


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