I have edited this a lot, but it still isn't even close to perfect. I would like a critique though... what I could do to make it better, what you like about it, what you dislike... that would be lovely
Lost within my soul
I feel a connection that seems to grow
You don't know how much I hurt
Or how much love I wish to show
Why is this even happening to me
Who put me in this curse
Your chains make it hard to breath
and when you talk it just gets worse
It's not fair what you put me through
You know there's so much pain
I'm only try to tell you what you want to hear
Confess my feelings? What is there to gain
Dammit, my heart is only broken
I want to tell you, but I can't confess
You might care--but what is there to do
To love you will only cause a mess
So, here I'm writing another poem
In which my soul keeps bleeding
and if I only wish for one more thing
I just hope you'll keep on reading...
