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piptik
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04-03-2010, 11:05 PM
Hi! These are a few of my best poems, please be kind to them ^^
Hopeless,
Dying,
Sprawled naked across the floor,
Every inch and every flaw,
Defenseless against hungry eyes,
Judging me on grounds,
That they themselves fear to tread.
No hope of rescue,
From this twisted thing know as fate,
Doomed am I to wander through this world,
Blind to everything beautiful,
And all to painfully aware of that which is
Ugly.
Pretending to be something else,
We will all show our true colors,
When death comes calling.
Okay, that was my first one.
Here's the next
Wrung and hung to dry,
No words worth hearing will pass these lips,
Inspiration leaves me alone.
Like a flower deprived of water,
I will wilt,
My leaves will brown and crumble,
MY petals pale and fall,
Leaving only a pathetic stem,
Behind.
Redundant and dull,
Mindless chatter flows out of me,
Nothing deeper than my very own skin.
Liking all this so far? I hope so lol =)
Confusion,
Muddle thoughts
In murky water.
Sorrow,
Aching heart,
Ready to break.
Knife,
Cold metal,
Steels away pain.
Blood,
Seeps drips,
Down bare arm.
Worries,
Float away,
Escaping from cut.
Warmth,
Returns finally,
I've found peace.
Sorry for the endless depression of these poems. This is the happiest one I've got:
Dancing in the rain,
Embrace the wet cold as it pours down,
And forget your petty worries,
Through away your sorrows,
Happiness is what you have left.
Immerse yourself in the here and now,
See what is in front of you, not what you have left behind.
Only a grain of sand on the beach,
Nothing more than a brush stroke in a painting,
Longing to be something more,
You are already an essential part of this world.
All the good things make life worth living, even if they are outweighed by the bad.
Wondering about the end,
Opaque is the border that separates this world and the next,
Realize that,
Death is only a word.
Okay, just one more poem!
Dear love of mine,
Unlike everything else that,
Will rot and perish,
The love I have for you is soft and,
Perpetual.
I'd follow you to the ends of the earth,
Even if you did not want me,
I'd cut out my heart and feed it to you,
So that we'd always be together.
If the gods aloud it,
I would cuff our wrists together,
So you'd always be true.
For you I would gouge out my eyes,
Pluck every hair from my body,
Immerse myself in white hot coals,
Or even,
Commit sepuku.
All for the love of you.
Okay, that's the best of my poems ^^ I hope you enjoyed them, if you want to see any more you can PM me or something lol Thanks for reading =D
Last edited by piptik; 04-07-2010 at 06:04 AM..
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Tate Icasa
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05-15-2010, 04:07 AM
I really liked the second one. And this line "The love I have for you is soft and, Perpetual" is amazing.
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Kelken
Ninja Kelli
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05-15-2010, 04:16 AM
I liked the last one the best its tragically lovely. You are brave for putting your poems out there, good for you!
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