Hey dad.
Remember the time,
when we were,
A family?

The days,
that you held,
My hand?

Or the time,
you played with,
Me and the Siblings?

Do you remember,
the years,
that i was Deprived?

Deprived of the dad,
I wish i had.

Wow, this is awesome! ^^ The transfer to the ending is really smooth and the rhythm is laid out clearly ^^ Can't find any qualms I would have with it, great job! =D

Thank you.
(:

Im feeling this feeling.
A feeling ive never ever felt before.

Im feeling this feeling just by looking at you.
Just by talking to you.
Just by thinking of you.

This feeling is doing many things to me me.
Its making me act the way a girl should act.
Making me do what a girl should do.

Day by day i ask myself.
Is This Love?
Or is it a dream?

Since you already have a poetry thread, I've gone ahead and merged the two together. Please update this topic with all of your new pieces. :yes: