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Old 04-28-2010, 07:22 AM

Please enjoy my poems.. Some are old and some are new. I would also love people to give me topics, just to see if I could write it :=)


These series of poems are based off a movie called Sky High I hope you enjoy them.
Notice each poem has a different perspective.

SPOILERX


Sky high chapter 1-The husband
What a great feeling it is
To know it’s the day Im suppose to get married
To have my heavenly wife In my arms… to carry
To love and nothing will set us apart
Not even the skies above, because for love I came too far
As she walked, I was nervous, then frightened
I looked at her chest and the heart she held was stolen
As she walked down the lane… every single second…blood drippin
My mind thoughts began to scramble and toss
I couldn’t tell you if this was reality or a dream
Who would've imagine me at our wedding
That ill have her lying down on me with my… legs bending
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Sky high chapter 2-The wife
Where am I?
Wasn’t I suppose to become a wife
In front of me I swear there was a husband.
The one I love, the one that held my hand
I closed my eyes and I appeared here
Suddenly a voice spoke
She claimed to be a guardian
And who ever came to this place
Was killed… I start to think and shake
She made it really clear I really was
Explaining that I ‘m just a spirit… a ghost;
in the real world
Watching my body in examination
Watching my love deteriorate in lost
And the only thing he could find was anger
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Sky high chapter 3-The killer
I am a man that is wealthy
Knowing happiness, is something that I can never buy
All the research I done wasn’t enough
Love is what made my heart warm
but since my love wasn’t around
I turned cold, feeling alone
Only one good thing is that
I can remember that touch
That voice
Something that makes me rejoice
Someone I need to live with again
I saw this book capable of doing it
To bring back my love… my life
In return I will have to conquer the world
Death can’t overcome love
Because love conquers all
So in return I say…
I will collect the 6 former guardian hearts
To bring back my love.
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Chapter 4-The Anger… that turns into frustration
Here sitting in a room…it’s very quiet
Not like the usual… I try to fight it
But it’s hard…because
I’m the same guy left without a wife
wondering… Heart thundering if I have a life
It’s like I forgot what’s wrong or right
All I want is love to hold tight
wondering if I died
would I see my love one
I lift my gun and point it directly
To my head
As I was pulling the trigger
Then the glass broke... and it stopped
my finger.

Chapter 5-The wife that feels helpless
Watching you suffer
Because I left a burden on you
Same pain is burning me too
Right into my soul… I’m still feeling you
You pulled that gun to your face
Thinking maybe you might see me again
I kept saying no… I want better for you
Live for me… don’t die for me
or you will definitely go to hell…
all these thoughts running in my head
As I kept saying no…and the more
I saw your finger pulling the trigger
The more my voice got louder
And somehow I was able to stop you.


Here is poem I tried writing, putting myself in a position of a beautiful woman who is just tired of her appearance.

SPOILERX

The old and beautiful
My heart is scolded and cold
Beauty never showed and now i'm old
Did i play it right...each role?
Despite the fouls that let me down
Have i accomplished goals.
I keep asking myself..confused now
Searching for love to put me out
To take away the misery
That got me in mystery
Thinking i was history
Because someone took my heart and this is a story
About a beautiful girl only loved by her appearance
She hated herself personally
Because her beauty was the interference
She kept getting used,but she tried to think she was useful?
A heart full of pain Just beating alone
She could only felt a sword in a stone
Sharp material cutting edge, bleeding words
All it is love, She wanted to take course
She kept cutting herself in pity like nothing else is worse
She drowned herself, strangle herself
She was fed up with her life
The things she got caught up with tangle herself
She said even though people see I'm beautiful
All the things i been through made me ugly now
And even if i try to rejuvenate I'm too old now
The old and beautiful

 


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