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Old 05-17-2010, 03:33 AM


There is nowhere else to hide
in the place inside my mind.
Where it seems always clouded,
and judgement isn't clear.

It just seems way too much.
Like the lights were broken off.
Like I'm hidden from the light.
And noone seems to care.

I have become my own prisoner.
In the middle of the dark.
Where nothing can be seen.
And I am sad and scared.

* If any one reads this, please don't think poorly of me, or what I wrote.*

But, then again, I suppose you won't, since everyone has their own ways of poetry.

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Old 05-19-2010, 12:51 AM

I think it's good. "Like the lights were broken off" is an amazing phrase.

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Old 05-19-2010, 01:20 AM

Thankyou. I wasn't really expecting anyone to reply though. lol I just wanted to let go of some steam without breaking my bedroom walls.

 


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