I am hoping to get some opinions on my poetry, so...um...here's my first poem...

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Darkness of the soul unbound
lost but can be found.
Shadows do hunt
on a bloody war front
and search for the pure,
those whose hearts are unsure.
And thus their numbers rise
searching for an unearthly prize.
And slowly does the heart
begin to rip apart.
Eyes no longer see light
only the horrors of night.


Warrior of Light
I forget, I remember.
I am sure this fear I won't regret.
Help, I am lost Darkness invading.
Will you save me, At any cost?
Brave warrior,
You are strange.
Your goal hidden behind a barren door.
The goal is light, powerful strength
A magic, of untold might.
So warrior, will you save me?
From behind the door?
Will you stand with me?
There is a new fight.
With you at my side
We will be light.
In a changing tide.

Predator
Utter nothing in this darkness.
Make not a single sound.
The eyes are watching unseen but deadly.
They stalk you, follow each echo.
Follow your breathing, the quickened pulse.
They hunt to feed.
Hunt to kill that which is their prey.


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Pain and despair
sicken the air.
My heart fails
as your body pails.
You vanish into night,
as I fade into light.
But do not fear
I will be there dear,
waiting in darkness.

Your first one, Predator, seems dark. Sorta like you're describing death... It's very good. The imagery is great. Could maybe use some more stanzas, but other then that good work.

The second, Untitled, You have a spelling error I think, you mean 'pales' instead of 'pails'. The first one implies loss of color. The second, and one you used, implies a type of bucket. Rhyming doesnt nessacarily mean that you have to have the same type of lettering, just that they sound alike. Otherwise the imagery is good. And can use another stanza or two.

Thanks. I am having to use a phone, and auto complete has become my dire enemy. Lol.

That's alright. I would love to hear more of your poetry. I hope you can come up with more soon. :)

I am hoping to add some more tonight.=3

That's great ^_^
I like all those poems, they are nice <3

Wow! Love the two new one's you put up! Very visual! <3 them! :)

Thanks.=3
I am glad you two enjoy them.