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Old 07-07-2010, 11:40 PM

Hey people! Ok here's what I'm gonna do. I'm gonna post one of my poems at least once or twice a week (if I remeber :|) and I would like to hear some feedback from you guys!

:arrow: Broken Hearts
When I reach out
To someone for company
They push me aside
My heart breaks once

When love is in my grasp
But when i try to share
My heart breaks twice

When I cry for help
They ignore my pleas
My heart breaks thrice

Now my heart breaks
A hundred times fold
My heart breaks more
When I think about these breaks

Now my life has ended
Just so I can take my broken heart
To a place where it will no longer break

Now I look down
To see those I know
I can see regret

Not taking my hand
Not sharing my love
Not helping me up


((this was one of the first one's I wrote so it aint very good :())

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ok here's another one

:arrow: Guardians Tale

During the long dark times
Guardians wrote the tales
Deep in the Pits of Time
Of the hero's throughout time

The ink from pens on parchment
Forming words of their tales
That shall forever be rembered
By those that read them

One lone guardian
Writes on parchment alone
He writes of the unfamous
The heros easily forgotten

Alone at a desk
With pen in hand
The lone guardian
Wrote of a hero
Forgotten to all but him

One who knew the tales
The tales of time
He travelled from place to place
And told his tales

Some asked why not once
But time and time again
Why he has not told tales
Of wisdom and strength

Time and time again
He gives them the same reply
Then says nothing more
And continues with his tales

The lone guardian
Was asked by the others
Time and time again
Why won't he write
Of the higher deeds

One day of light
Broke through the darkness
And the long dark days
All came to a end

The lone guardian
Was nowhere to be found
All that remained was his scrolls
And his last piece of parchment
That held his last drops of ink

The words thin lines
Were loud and clear
Paoinfully remebering the words

The hero's of wisdom and strength
Are remembered by mind
But those of smaller deeds
Are remembered by heart

 


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