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ZeGuMmIBeaRQueEn 07-12-2010 08:50 AM

Hush Little Victim
 
A twisted remake of the lullaby, "Hush Little Baby". I made this for a character in a story I'm writing; a serial killer that goes by the alias "Autumn Leaves". (or "A" or "Leaf" for short) She's slightly insane, and doing something like singing her victims a creepy lullaby just seems like something she would do.

Please tell me what you think! <3 (Constructive critisism welcome and encouraged!)


Hush Little Victim

Hush little victim, don't you cry.

A will sing you a lullaby.

If that lullaby isn't heard,

A will kill a mocking bird.

If that mocking bird won't bleed,

A will make sure that you scream.

If this victim will not gasp,

A will get you with a looking glass.

If that looking glass can't be broke,

A will strangle you till you croak.

If this victim will not choke,

Autumn Leaves will slit your throat.


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