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Old 09-26-2010, 06:34 PM

Well hello there! I'm Simply Sui Generis, and you've entered my poetry thread. Pretty much, its just going to be a place to post my poems when I write them... or a place for me to come for inspiration when I want to write but can't think of anything.

Just a note: I write a lot of Haikus. I just love the haiku form, so many of the things posted here will be haikus.

I think for the most part I'll just be editing this first post to update the poetry in it.

Please let me know what you think of my work! I do love to hear from people. And I'm generally pretty friendly...
Oh! And I'm always interested in reading new things, so please, if you have reccomendations, let me know! And I'd be glad to read your work too, if you'd like.
So...
Adieu, say Adieu,
It's time to say goodbye, friend
For this is the end.

Our Story

Let's write a story,
You and me
And show the world
What we can be.

Take my hand,
We've things to do
Lets show the world
That love is true.

Beliar
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Old 09-27-2010, 02:24 AM

I like the first one x3 I love how each line flows into the next, and how it sounds as a whole.
The second one is really good too =o

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Old 09-27-2010, 05:18 AM

Thank you! :boogie:
The first one I like a lot... But I like most of the haikus I write.
The second one I sort of wrote on a whim... But I kind of like the rough feel of it, not so.. refined.
Thanks for reading :)

 


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