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I'll give you a poem with a riddle inside, figure out the riddle and make that a poem! ;) Tricky but fun!
I'm born again, just fresh out of the womb And I am slowly dieing, for my time is near.. Don't be so sad my dear friend, you may not be fresh yet, but soon you will be reborn. Hah, you say such things but at my age, at my time... that won't happen. You're innocent yet, wait until later! Someone once told me: Ones that are born are the kind and golden ones, Yet as they age their love slowly withers... Tell me dear friend, what is the meaning? That is a secret for the ancient... That's the end of it. And my challenge is set forth, the answer is written all over it.. just a small hint. ;) Have fun deciphering and have fun poetry writing! |
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Inside your mind I creep and crawl Finding your secrets Helping fix your faults My voice sooths you A we speak alone You tell me everything Without fear of rebuke I am your confidant Litening to your ails I am your doctor Of mind and heart I hope this one's good enough for you Miss_Muffinz13x: |
What about hm.....
Maybe one about a person with a twisted mind, loves a monster without a head, and loves 'humans' and putting them in devious situations :D? I just wanna see what you come up with ^^ |
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The voices speak to me telling me of my beloved No eyes to see me No lips to kiss me No neck to kiss It tells of our geart love and how it will last forever Our hearts as one Our lusts of truth Our everything The mortals run about us not knowing of our plans To touch forbidden flesh To give into passion To feel slick bodies Let them run from we lovers and let them have no solace Give them one last breath Give them one last word Give them peace at last Ugh, I hate loseing track of this thread! There you are DaisyKeehl: what cha think? |
Its pretty good! :) Your writting is reeaallyyy interesting
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Well, any more challengers? DO I need to post more random Poetry here?
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One night while I was living in Florida I was walking around just for the hell of it. Then I turned over to my left and I stared upon a beautiful blue moon that was a large as a house just before me. Now the scenery was an open field surrounded by a stream and a bunch of palm trees. The part that tops it off is the birds that settle in the area. There actually was a pelican there that early night. Not long after that.... somewhere in my mind a month within? I ended up seeing a gorgeous red moon right after in the same place.
Think you can write something that can make me feel the same beautiful scenery? |
Its been two days mister and you have no one else your working on lawl
I win -runs away- |
how about this.... Giggle-snort
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Not quite a giggle not quite a snort she covers her mouth to hide her sport Played with a guy just across the hall as on a banana peel he did slip and fall A form of stifled laughter of desperately hidden mirth refraining from exposing humor for all it's worth Here you are Nettchen11: Enjoy! |
I love you soooooooo much!!!!!!
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hey! I'm back with the perfect idea!!!....hopefully...
Anyway, you should do one where this guy is in a band with his two twin brothers but they die in a car accident and hunts there brother every time he tries to play o.o yes, this is my idea for a poem lol |
Here's a silly one:
Write a poem about a man who drove his car backwards up a tree while eating spaghetti! ;D |
I GOT A SLIGHTLY TWISTED ONE!
squirrels eating my eyes! >:3 i like poetry myself but all mine turn out dark i couldnt do this cuz i cant write happy lolz i wish i could write like you |
hello fellow poet! here's one for you: write a poem while listening to 'at anchor' by port blue
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But now I find I'm all alone Thoughts of our years together haunt me Everytime I pick up my sticks to play My brothers dear one just like the other Why did you leave me To tell our mother Why couldn't you stay and throw back another Give me this night to play one last time your spirits around me as I pay for my crimes Letting you leave me though I knew you unfit to drive yourselves home I should have stopped it I feel you here now your souls float around me as I play one last time before returning to thee Give me a sign Let me return A band once again Or let my soul burn AshbornFox: There you go! Sorry it took so long! ---------- Quote:
Every time I suck them up I find meyself somewhere stuck Like squirming worms I slurp them inside Gulping them down as I go for a ride But what is the fun in the same old direction? I'll take to it different this time How about some reverse? My focus returns to my sketty and I fail to see the oncoming traffic and of coarse the tree So here I sit Sucking up this fine meal once again stuck 'Cause how noodles make me feel. I hope that works for you fiana7895: ! ---------- Quote:
I look below and see me there No longer moving I no longer care Lifeless and cold my body will rot My body is ther but I am not Rats will nest in my stomach and flies in my hair Squirrels will eat my eyes and I guess that is fair Let them do what they like with that abandoned flesh For I go to a better place a place where air is fresh This is my final good-bye but I know that no one will cry For I died so long ago the joy I have now they must surly know Up or down it matters not to me for now this time I am finally free Saphire4260: I made this one happy for you. At least it is to me. I hope you like it! Sorry for the late response! ---------- Quote:
I move along through my life My soul's rythem echoed in my steps The people around me Paying me no mind As my soul takes wing For the very first time Like the flutter of a dove A light chirp in it's beat I find myself willing To greet another day The toils try and bring me down But I must fly to this soulful sound All those around me They dream as I do But we are mute to one another We all live our own dreams So as I move along I listen to the song From deep within and it help me go From moment to moment Fufuling my soul fade_to_grey: Just got my internet up and running smoothly, so sorry for the delay. I hope you like it! It's a nice song, and it really held me there. thanks for the challenge! I hope to see more coming, now that I have the ability to respond once again! |
thanks!!!! -squeeel- i loved it lol :)
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SO glad you like it. Any more challenges?
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It was great! It seemed happy to me, thank you!
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LOVED IT! ;D
How about.. evil sweaters attacking something. |
What about some one who is insane wants to get a red rose for someone he loves but when he gets to a small flower thing to get the rose they only have white roses so he kills the shop person so he can dip the rose in the mans blood in order to get his red rose
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There they run There they flee Here they go on Here they come to me WIthout a hope Without a plea Within the comfort Within the city I attack them I set them free I am the killer sweater I am coming for thee fiana7895: There you go, hope you like it! ---------- Quote:
Free from the chains that bound him The man sets out to prove his love He follows his nose to the place The place he has been dreaming of The flower's sweet scent give rise to pain The pain that had caused him to go insain His eye seek out the rose so red Finding it not, he kills the vendor dead Picking up a rose of white He dips it in the spreading pool Of crimson blood pouring into the night To make the rose match his heart To his love he will bring the flower And in that moment will be her final hour Saphire4260: I know the rhyming seems a little wonkey, but with the right beat, you'll get it. Hope you like it! |
That was aweaome! I loved it, i actually really liked how the rymeing is! Thank you so much i loved it
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Saphire4260: Glad you liked it. It was fun to write.
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HEY I HAVE ONE!!!!! do it on how this quote makes you feel or think of or whatever,
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