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Aru's Free Verse Poetry
Give me the Sky
as a dress and the Stars for my hair. Give me the Moon as a pearl and it's shimmering ocean reflection as necklaces. Tell me my voice is like a songbird. That my skin is as perfect as a single rose petal. Whisper to me that my eyes shine like the Sun my long hair runs like silk through your fingers Show me the wonders that make your life magic Teach me your light How do you manage? Why do I only see darkness Where you tell me there is light? Give me the Earth and I shall create our world. Give me a pen and ink and I shall write you poetry. Give me your thoughts and I shall listen with care. Honour me with love and I shall give you my best smile. For all you will Give me I ask for you not to be greedy. There is not much of me you can Take. For all that I was has been long since stripped away from me. I will Give all that remains to you. if You can only Give one thing to me I do not wish for the moon or stars all I ask is that you give this ruined, dark soul a Chance at light. (What do you think? I'm quite proud of it :D It was inspired by this song: YouTube - ‪Billy Talent - Tears into wine with Lyrics‬‏ Not to sound like an attention whore, but comment please :)) |
It sounds lovely! It's tough to be inspired by a song without completely ripping it off, so it seems like you've found a great balance with this. :)
But since it's a poem, I've just moved it into our Poetry subforum for you. |
(oh sorry, totally didn't see that XD)
Here's my latest poem, once again inspired by a song (or in this case a cover of a song) Hear it here "Last" You're so beautiful when you sleep It's impossible to think that this could be the last time I'll ever see you. We've always been together since the beginning of our lives. If it's impossible for me, what is it like for you? To imagine that your time is almost up, I never really knew, Are you religious? Do you believe in Heaven? You're not going to Hell Trust me dear, I know Better then you do I think. You always thought you were evil You never saw How perfect you were- I mean are. You're not gone yet. You're not dead yet baby. There's still a chance. I know you hate when I say this but why did it have to be you? Of all the terrible people in the world... No I can't say that .... Oh, you're awake I know, I know "There are no bad people just bad desicions" It's just... It's not fair you know? Of course you know. You know better then anyone. But your dumb enough to think you deserve it. Oh sorry I didn't mean that.... ... I know dear You're the Perfect devil and I'm the Sinful Angel. We've played this game before. Surely you know it's not real? .... Well I didn't mean to demean you ... I'm sorry I'm just frustrated with you being like that You're perfect and I wish you could see that ... No! I'm not just saying that. It's true. You refuse to see your own beauty it's always been that way ... No- I don't mean- ... Okay! Okay... I'll stop "attacking" you but you know I"m right which is why your behaving like this ... ...... ............ ..................... baby? |
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