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Goodbye
This is a poem I made, or a song, whatever one it falls more into. But I'd really appreiciate some feedback :)
Ready or not here it comes Don't hide your face Or fear your tears This is it How it's gonna be I wanna see your face And feel your embrace Kiss away my tears And vanquish all my fears I wanna see your face And feel your embrace Lets go back And get on track Don't say goodbye All the smiles And things you did I never stopped caring even when you did I wanna see your face and feel your embrace Kiss away my tears and vanquish all my fears I wanna see your face And feel your embrace Baby lets go back and get on track Don't say goodbye. (Goodbye) Ready or not Here it comes Don't hide your face Or fear your tears This is it How it's gonna be But baby please I don't wanna hear goodbye I'm not ready Don't want it to come I'm hiding my face I'm scared to cry But this is it Our final goodbye |
Tokyo Moon this is a lovely free verse poem song thingy but is is defiantly inspirational.
I hope you write more. |
It's good. Like, Medusa Flame said I hope you write more. I have my own collection of poems too, but haven't gotten any replies. :( I love your poem/song and I really hope you write more. XD
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