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Moony's Poems
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When It's Night-Time The black smoke starts to taint the blue skies It is night-time again The streets would get darkened by deep blue Violets reflect too The time when people would rest, would sleep For others, to weep And for me to seek For the time I cannot find in daylight. Wide awake all night While my loved ones sleep tight No attempts of waking them I won't try to bother For I am contented alone 'Til dawn, I'm up 'Til the morning's sunlight have shown. |
Deceived
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Deceived That scent Captivating Alluring Making my heart obey The spell that you convey. My mind You can never control But you captured My heart, my soul For I cannot refuse The beauty I see Your scheme to deceive At all times Makes me believe. |
Beautiful People
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Beautiful People Often miles away Superstars Or If just down the street Unreachable Untouchable Can only be observed By afar. They are not directly looked in the eyes. It can be But it would not be easy. They seem fragile. They seem divine. Inspiring yet embarrassing. |
Ice Cold
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Ice Cold You gave me The coldest triggering feeling I've ever felt In the chest. Realizing we're almost close But did not have the rest. I'm sorry for just being good And not being at my best. You like her, don't you? She must have been blessed.[/i] |
Hey there, Maroon! Since the Poetry subforum rules state that users are only allowed one thread, I've gone ahead and merged all your poetry threads. I've also put the rating part in quotes for the last three poems as the information is the same and could be considered spam. Feel free to edit in the titles for each poem! :D
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Calling Of The Night
Calling of The Night
I can hear a never-ending buzz. Vibrating to my ears. The soft cold thin air. Embracing. I looked up Stared at the ceiling Thinking Why am I still awake Despite of the night's horror Of what it can cause Nightmares? Ghastly illusions? Strange noises of things falling apart. I might be afraid But it might also be The calling of the night Where the sleepless Stays awake. |
For Heath
Please correct any grammatical errors, if there is any. Thanks :^)
----- For Heath Oh, those eyes Those smiles That face! You are truly beautiful With a smile That melts The hearts, amazed Every woman Would dream a miracle. I might say, "Stop that! That look." For it gives me a hook A hook I can never resist For I see sparks and glimmers Clouds that shimmer Rain that pours joy and bliss. This liking I feel Is just getting real For I wept a bit When you slipped away. The pinch in my heart Later, tearing apart For I know I may never see you again. That you're gone. You are done. God took his angel back. |
Maroon, please remember to update this thread with any poetry you might have in the future. Users are only allowed to have one Poetry thread, so you will get in trouble for spamming if you continue to make a new topic for each poem. :yes:
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D'oh! >.<
Sorry. I will now bookmark this thread. Sorry. Thanks for reminding me *phew! |
Flowing
Like the flowing river Let the liquids push me away Like the whistling wind Let my mind whirl faraway. |
Drops
The rain won't stop Heavy drops Of eager waters Hitting the roof Making melodies of crackling metals. As I listen to the rough rhythms I thought of when it will stop The flashes of suspicious lightnings Seem to be warning men On how mad nature can be. |
You are really good! XD I hope you write more so I can read more! :)
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Thanks :D Ahe.
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hey maroon!!
i love your first poem, beautiful people and drops [my favs] they are cute poems <3 <3 and yeah! your avatar is cute :)) |
Aww. Thanks [boogie]
---------- Post added 12-21-2012 at 12:20 AM ---------- Annoyance The annoyance I pull off the strands of my hair Off my skin And such things They come back And greater this time And have conquered my mind For I don’t know the answer To the great horrifying riddle But a doctor’s help. ---------- Post added 12-21-2012 at 12:21 AM ---------- Graying Fields I walked in the graying fields today Saw the pale greetings of the blossoms Gazed at the sad hues of the sky And thought how pale mornings could be Without bringing happy tales in our sleeps. |
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