*transfers poetry from Zantarni before making up new pieces*

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I`m an angel about to fall,
Leaning closer and closer to the edge.
Please, pull me from this brawl
That brings me nearer to my ledge.
Don`t hurt me, don`t push me
Not when I`m here on the line.
My love, won`t you hear my plea?
Don`t you remember that you were once mine?
Let`s go back to those days
When we were in love.
Our hearts were one maze
And our voices one dove.
Yet falling and screaming now,
I only see your smile.
If only I had known how
Things had turned so vile.

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From the deep sea of despair,
My soul is born into a cruel world.
They scream and try to break through the water,
And I reach out to them, my heart becoming unfurled.

I grab hold of them, and pull them out,
Finding my baby cold and barely alive..
I embrace them, never wanting to let go..
For I know, I need them to survive..

The rhythem of that small heart begins to slow,
And I feel the darkness lean in for its final kiss.
My universe dissapears so swiftly,
As we are taken to our bliss.

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This feeling I get when we touch,
The shivers that I have learned to embrace..
I am the one that you clutch,
Though your hands don't leave a single trace..

My angel, my flame, my love..
Your wings become my own, and we fly away.
And we rise to the breaking point and above..
As glass falls down and shatters, we still play.

My darling, my lock, my one..
Never let these wings fail, never let this dream fade..
I'll hold you until my life and soul come undone..
As long as you hold me, I'll never be afraid..

Take me away, take me by your side.
Let us be together, like we are now.
Our passion, our flames, will never subside.
I'll love you, my angel.. This I vow..

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Hazzah! *scurries off to think of more*

^_____^ *is filled with the joynessnessity that she can write here*

*writes a new poem offa the top of her head*

Ummmm....

Okies!

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The darkness surrounds us tonight,
As we warm one another in an embrace.
When I came to you, you never put up a fight.
We had lain together in a haste.

Love and lust, both come into play.
As I clear my mind, I seek the truth
Of what it was that made me stay.
The love of a lifetime, or lust of youth?

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Opinions? Should I add more? ._.

I like your last poem. They're all well written. The mental imagery is well played in the last poem and first one. I think that's great. You're a great poet. Have you ever tried getting something published? You'd go far. The last one you wrote off the top of your head is my favorite of what you have. I'm not that great at poetry. But I know good stuff when I see it. Well done oh she of who wrote good poems!(bows) Good luck to you!