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Innie 01-27-2007 05:31 AM

Something new
 

Alright.. So this is a poem.. In paragraph/story form.. Anyone ever make one of these before? Well, I love to make them, and here's mine.

If I had one tear to shed, it would be for you. If I had a single breath, I'd call out your name. If I could share my soul, you'd always see something new. If you were mine and I were yours, then I would take the blame.

Hold me now, my dearest one, say those words to me. Show me what I've wanted most, show me what I need. Never let me out your sight, never leave me be. Lie me down and make me yours, and I will let you lead.


Lol.. So, in boring poem form, that would be..

If I had one tear to shed,
It would be for you.
If I had a single breath,
I'd call out your name.
If I could share my soul,
You'd always see something new.
If you were mine and I were yours,
Then I would take the blame.

Hold me now, my dearest one,
Say those words to me.
Show me what I've wanted most,
Show me what I need.
Never let me out your sight,
Never leave me be.
Lie me down and make me yours,
And I will let you lead.


The title is The Dance

Ayashi 01-27-2007 07:22 AM

*luffs on it* You write many poems...a hobby? Do you write often?

Innie 01-27-2007 07:44 AM


I write when I have stress..

Ayashi 01-27-2007 07:52 AM

*pets hair* I hope it's not too much stress...

Innie 01-27-2007 07:52 AM


It's A LOT of stress..

I had to do one of the hardest things ever today..

Innie 01-27-2007 08:56 AM


Good <3

Anamei 02-11-2007 12:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Innie

It's A LOT of stress..

I had to do one of the hardest things ever today..

What did you have to do? (Whenever I have to do something hard, it helps me to say it. ^^.)

Lilithia 02-11-2007 01:17 AM

Wow Innie! I really like this one!! Keep up the great work Innie!!

Hanako 02-11-2007 01:31 AM

Fantastic! It's great. I really like it. :) *applauds*

flaming-Scorpion 02-17-2007 08:18 PM

well, i like it!!!!! very sweet and smooth, it has a very nice flow!!!
good job!!! :D

keep on writing!!!!!


Now for a little poem of my own...this be kinda old >.<:

_The End_

clouded
shining through the fog
blinded by confusion
coldness that overwhelms the soul
darkness

Dark eyes
death/the reward
for living mortal life
death is welcomed after sharp pain
frozen

soul freed
wanted ending
redemption of the soul
wandering the world/leaving in peace
sweet bliss

joyful
chains of life gone
reincarnated life
living a new in the next world
new home

i've written a lot better but..meh..someone might enjoy it!!!
ps: I AM NOT AN EMO~~!! okay i'm done! =3


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