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Something new
Alright.. So this is a poem.. In paragraph/story form.. Anyone ever make one of these before? Well, I love to make them, and here's mine. If I had one tear to shed, it would be for you. If I had a single breath, I'd call out your name. If I could share my soul, you'd always see something new. If you were mine and I were yours, then I would take the blame. Hold me now, my dearest one, say those words to me. Show me what I've wanted most, show me what I need. Never let me out your sight, never leave me be. Lie me down and make me yours, and I will let you lead. Lol.. So, in boring poem form, that would be.. If I had one tear to shed, It would be for you. If I had a single breath, I'd call out your name. If I could share my soul, You'd always see something new. If you were mine and I were yours, Then I would take the blame. Hold me now, my dearest one, Say those words to me. Show me what I've wanted most, Show me what I need. Never let me out your sight, Never leave me be. Lie me down and make me yours, And I will let you lead. The title is The Dance |
*luffs on it* You write many poems...a hobby? Do you write often?
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I write when I have stress.. |
*pets hair* I hope it's not too much stress...
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It's A LOT of stress.. I had to do one of the hardest things ever today.. |
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Wow Innie! I really like this one!! Keep up the great work Innie!!
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Fantastic! It's great. I really like it. :) *applauds*
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well, i like it!!!!! very sweet and smooth, it has a very nice flow!!!
good job!!! :D keep on writing!!!!! Now for a little poem of my own...this be kinda old >.<: _The End_ clouded shining through the fog blinded by confusion coldness that overwhelms the soul darkness Dark eyes death/the reward for living mortal life death is welcomed after sharp pain frozen soul freed wanted ending redemption of the soul wandering the world/leaving in peace sweet bliss joyful chains of life gone reincarnated life living a new in the next world new home i've written a lot better but..meh..someone might enjoy it!!! ps: I AM NOT AN EMO~~!! okay i'm done! =3 |
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