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Sometimes I Wonder...
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I rather like this, Nexess... full of those unanswerable questions that we all have from time to time. *nods*
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I like the idea of this poem, but I feel it could be better if you used "prettier" words to describe things instead of common language.
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I rather like the simplicity of the language, I think it matches the tone of the piece in this instance, although I know what you mean, Seishuku. *nods* :)
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<<;; yes well i was going to write it as it was in my journal but the words i used needed to be simplified.... believe me none of you would have been able to understand them.
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Wow, just wow. I love this poem so much. I can relate to it too! Excellent job!!
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I want to read more of your poetry. :D
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Alright Nexy, looking forward to it. :D
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