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Shank Poem x3
Woah, im hoping I'll be able to remeber this. It's a poem I wrote a while back, then memorized, but it was about 4 months ago so im not sure if i can remeber it perfectly. Here goes.
Coming from the darker side Strain to see the light In every dark soul abide of the soul in spite, The need to see a peaceful self To release the feelings pent To see upon one's heart's own shelf, a message, heart-felt sent Cold air from the outer world enwarmed amid the flesh upon the message seal ensnare spurring judgement sweet and fresh Egad, i think that's it ^^; I'll double check later and edit it. It might even have a fourth verse... Yeah. There was a fourth verse. Shoot. I'll edit it as soon as I find the old poem and can double check this. But in the meantime, how do you like it? :? |
I think you did a good job!!! =3. i like it, its not bad for your first or second try at poetry right?
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