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Nexess 02-13-2007 03:18 AM

Can You Really Hear Me?
 
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If I Prayed Day And Night,
Would You Answer Me?
Would You Tell Me Everything Was Going To Be Ok?
That It'll Be Alright?

If You Could Would You Help Me?
If I Were To Call Would You Answer Me?
Or Would You Just Let Me Fall?

If You Really Are Real,
Why Are Bad Things Happening?
Why Don't You Stop Them?
They Hurt Us All But You Let It Go On.

Are You Really There?
Up There?
In The Sky?
Or In The Stars?

Please Oh Please Answer Me!
I Need Your Guidence!
Please Oh Please Answer Me!

If I Prayed Day And Night....
You Still Wouldn't Answer Me.

I was Wondering if god or whoever was really real one night when i couldn't sleep, I had tons of questions so i wrote everyone down and made a small poem about them.

<< yes I'm posting alot of poems, only cause Lilithia likes the so much <3

Lilithia 02-13-2007 03:32 AM

OOOH I like this one! Better than the second one you posted up most definitely!!


This one is really beautiful. ;D

Nexess 02-13-2007 03:56 AM

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Originally Posted by Lilithia
OOOH I like this one! Better than the second one you posted up most definitely!!


This one is really beautiful. ;D

^^;; thanks, this is a more questioning one then the other, most of them are liek this.

tanarif984 02-13-2007 09:35 AM

Nice, ive read a lot of your ones lately and there all real good.
Hope to read a few more^^

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Nexess 02-13-2007 05:45 PM

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Originally Posted by tanarif984
Nice, ive read a lot of your ones lately and there all real good.
Hope to read a few more^^

<<;; you probly will, whenever i get around to writting more PG ones... </3 nexess' poems arn't normally this nice xP

Lillia Takaji 02-13-2007 06:45 PM

awww. man. that's sad D:

Nexess 02-14-2007 02:27 AM

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Originally Posted by Lillia Takaji
awww. man. that's sad D:

D: I'm sorry! It kind of just came out this way </3


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