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Old 02-21-2007, 10:49 PM

Found my old post! Hurrah! Ok well I'm going to use this one as my poetry corner, now I have to add all the other poems to it and make a new one just for mene !



Can I Borrow Your Spoon?

You like me right?
You do! I know it!
Please Please Let Me Use IT!

I just need to for a few minutes!
I'll give it right back,
come on you like me right!

It's a one time thing!
It won't kill you!
Well, you never know...

I might have some sort of something in me,
But it'll probly wash off!
PLEASE!!!! I need it!

Can I borrow it!
Just For a Few!
Can I Have You Spoon?

Is It A Good Thing?

Is It A Good Thing
That I'm Small?
That I'm Tall?
That I'm Different?

Is It Really A Good Thing?
Can You Really Say It Is?

No? Why Not Then?
You Don't Know?
Then Why A No?

But Now You Say Yes?
Why The Sudden Change?
Can You Answer Me?
Why Won't You Answer Me?

I Need To Know!
Is It Ok!
Can I Be Different!

I Need An Asnwer!
Times Tick Ticking Away!
Come On Just Say It!
It's Not Ok!

Don't Worry I Understand.
You Won't Answer Because Your Afraid.
Your Afraid If You Say Yes It'll Be Wrong.
But It's Ok.
You'll Never Be Wrong.

Becasuse Your My Love.
And You'll Never Be Wrong.



Sometimes I Wonder....

Sometimes I wonder,
What comes after death?
A new body?
A holy land?
Or perhaps a land of fire.

Sometimes I wonder,
Is any of it true?
Can we really be born again?
Into a new?
Is it true?

Sometimes I wonder,
When my time is up,
Will I go to that place?
You knwo that place,
Where everyone is happy and no one dies?

Sometimes I Wonder,
Is all just a dream?
Is it a dream where when the dreamer wakes,
I will be no more?

Sometimes I wonder,
Am I a good person?
Have I done enough?
Did I harm the ones I love?

So tell me this.
Can you answer the questions above?



Can You Really Hear Me?

If I Prayed Day And Night,
Would You Answer Me?
Would You Tell Me Everything Was Going To Be Ok?
That It'll Be Alright?

If You Could Would You Help Me?
If I Were To Call Would You Answer Me?
Or Would You Just Let Me Fall?

If You Really Are Real,
Why Are Bad Things Happening?
Why Don't You Stop Them?
They Hurt Us All But You Let It Go On.

Are You Really There?
Up There?
In The Sky?
Or In The Stars?

Please Oh Please Answer Me!
I Need Your Guidence!
Please Oh Please Answer Me!

If I Prayed Day And Night....
You Still Wouldn't Answer Me.



If It Hurts.

If It Hurts,
Does It Mean Something?
Cause It Hurts.

It Hurts More Then Anything.
It's A Different Pain,
Different From Just Pain.

It's All Consuming.
It's Turning My World,
Round And Round.

Can You Stop It Now?
I Don't Think I Can Last.
It's Just So Painful.

This Pain Of Mine,
I Can't Get Rid Of It.
It Just Stays.

The Pain, it Really Hurts.
What's It From?
I'd Like To Think.

Just For A Moment.
That This Pain Isn't Bad.
But I Know It Is.

This Pain.
It's From My Heart.
My Poor Broken Heart.

Heal It Please,
All I Want Is The Pain To Go Away.
Please Heal My Poor Broken Heart.



Doubt

Words spoken in innocent,
Hurt more then not.
In times of Fury we hurt.

Words spoken lovingly,
Spoken so carefully.
Doubt and worry ring in your heart.

We speak but rarely.
Never really saying much.
Our minds are warping.

The words once spoken,
So carefully and full of doubt.
Now are cold and non-heartfelt.

We sing praises for those around.
We act so strange,
And without a doubt.

Our world is ending.
Nothing to worry about.
We're going away now.

When the world ends for us,
We'll be free of all this doubt.
Never to regain our fallen love.

Or our misguided doubt.
But it's nothing to worry about.
We'll go on in this world of worries.

We'll find someone new,
Someone with no doubts.
We speak these words of innocence.....

But we always have a cloud of doubt...




Pitiless Eyes

You Act Like I'm TO Blame For Everything.
Your Eyes Black As Night And Yet Clear As Day.
You Show No Feels, No Love Or Kindness.
All You Are Is A Lifeless Soul Who Brings Forth Despair.

Any Act Of Kindness Is A Way To Something Else,
It's Never About Helping Or Saving Those You Know.
You Have To Gain To Help Those Who Need You Help.
You Must Prosper Or You Just Stare At Us.

Your Smile Is Empty And Void, Only Pain Lives There.
You Smile And Stare At All With The Same Gaze.
You Pity,Care And Love None But Yourself.
Your Eyes Are My Pitiless Despair.

You Seem To Be In Some Sort Of Despair.
Did My Words Effect You Some? Or Maybe My Stare?
We Have No Real Hope For You. Not With Your Eyes.
Your Eyes Of My Pitiless Despair.

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Old 02-22-2007, 03:05 AM

wow for some reason i REALLY enjoyed this xD -wishesitwasaspork- but i think spoon is the best utencil x3
very creative...... :D -mayiborrowYOURspoon?-

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Old 02-22-2007, 11:13 PM

xD you wouldn't believe how much i annoyed him with this xD lol

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Old 03-13-2007, 01:15 AM

I love this one. xD
It's so amusing! <3

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Old 03-13-2007, 01:23 AM

T_T so touching
*gives spoon*

reminds me of the time i lost my bag and wrote an epic poem about it

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Old 03-16-2007, 03:32 PM

The lack of proper punctuation was a bit distracting, and this read more like a conversation than a poem in part, but it's a great title and a great subject. I hope you got your spoon ;)

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Old 10-06-2007, 05:23 PM

Well, this was easier to find then I though it would be ,right on the last page!

I'll be updating this with a new poem sometime soon, I have to think of it first, till then enjoy my older ones.

 


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