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Soldier. Please comment.
I'm a soldier on the battlefield
starin' at the blood-red sky turnin' to the darkness in my heart for disguise. and though I don't show my tears deep inside I cry wishin' for eternal peace like love in the sky. |
Ooooh, it's nice. n_n Very touching~
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mmmm i think you could have better wordin =/
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I really love the flow of the entire piece. It's a very vivid picture that you paint. :) Awesome job!
- sapphire |
I'd love to take the imagry from that poem and draw it...Telling the truth...
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Really nice. :]
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I can just picture it!! :3 nice job, conveying a strong picture and emotion in just a few lines ^^
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