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Hmm... Your most recent one has stumped me. If I hazarded a guess, I'd have to say the sun, but I'm not certain. If you're referring to a real celebrity, then I'm lost because I'm completely out of the loop when it comes to things like that.
And for your previous one, are you referring to a purse? Jingle jangle Your charms create A cacophony of sounds. Ring bring Not your only tone But one of a symphony. My connection to the world Comes with me everywhere I carry all my friends, my family Safe within my pocket. |
I'd Have to say a cell phone.
Different ring tones. A connection to everyone. Tick, Tock A annoying little sound, A sound that perceives life and death. Tick, Tock So annoying it is, But if it stops will you go on? Tick, Tock Though annoying it is, It lulls you and you know you go on. |
I go under the shade,
Sharpening my blade, Right in the darkest night, Oh, what a fright! Another poem Enjoy the holiday season, Its always here for a reason, To enjoy it with family and friends, And get the latest trends. Reply if you like them.:) UserI'mTalkingTo: Mellie_AngelRose Hey. Cool avatar. I wish I had enough money to do that. |
for the first one: like a ninja in the night or something?
my poem: Your shine lights up my darkness Showing me the way No matter the darkness, you are there Lighting the way for all to see Watching over all, so no one gets lost |
hmm, makes me think of a floating ball of light.
Fair one, you hold my heart Fair one, you hold my soul If ever love was art, Your love would be far too cold. I reach for you, but you deny Emotion, Love, you give me lies I want the truth but you say 'Wait,' And much restrained, my patience wanes One day you disappear, just gone I wander without aim Then realize all this time I'd done With my life, Nothing. @Delish: that other poem was a purse, wasn't it? ^^ I use my purse for everything oh, psy already said it XD |
Might be close minded of me at the moment, but I saw a girl who's life was dedicated to a lover but in the end he didn't return her love so she saw that her life has been nothing.
I cried for you today I saw your back turned to me In anger? In regret? To have yearned for so long Been caressed by your hand for so long My bed side is cold tonight As is my heart Ice frozen 'til eternity Not necessarily good when sleepy sleepy, but I hope it will suffice |
Hmm, heartbreak? Crying, frozen heart, sounds like heart break.
Women cry and children sigh As the men fight and die A pool of crimson blood Over the land it floods The men kill Kill, until they've had their fill |
[Kidalanna seems to perceive that your poem is about war?]
He's done it for his family, The family that is starving, Although it's been done naughtily, For him a headstone they're carving. The baker's bread was missing, A farmer lost a chicken, His wife he's no longer kissing, By friends the man was stricken. |
i got a father that was forced to steel and even kill to keep his family alive
sleek and smooth I fly through liquid skies breathtakingly beautiful with a youth that never dies you know not that i live you know not i give the wind to guide your sail you know not the beauty of my tale though you have sung of it you do not know... |
Dragon? God/Goddess of some sort...the flying is throwing me.
Sail, Oh Tortured Soul, sail! For your fate at the horizon sits. Sail, Oh Tortured Soul, sail! And come to the end of your wits. Fight, Oh Tortured Soul, fight! For more bloodshed will surely come. Fight, Oh Tortured Soul, fight! For soon your life will be done. Rough, but I like it ^_^ |
@ Sidhechild: You got it right, pretty much. ^^ [he didn't kill, but he did steal; at the end, he gets executed for it]
Hmm... Is it about the crew of a sailing ship [the sail part] who are about to crash into something? [the 'your fate at the horizon sits'] Heaving over the edge, It slowly rose from its rest, Shining over the hedge, Child wakes, it passed the test. The joy it spread, As the horizon it passed, We'd all be dead, If it's that shine were it's last. |
Well done...I'd take a guess at yours (I'm pretty sure I've already got it), but I don't want to post so soon after mine...
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@Kidalanna:
Your poem is about the sun rising? xD I suck at interpreting poetry. Waned sphere fades away, Another sleep-filled twenty-four. The world awakens. ...I suck at writing it, too. >>; |
@Faggotory Fun: Liking the haiku. I wrote six or seven of those last night...Um, I'm going to take a guess and say you're talking about the new moon?
Despise me if you must, For I look beyond your lust, and push and pull you as I may. Others caress your skin, And oh, how I hate them, for trying to have their way. So go on singing your song, As though nothing is wrong, and I will sit among the stars, and sway. I tried to make this one a little tricky, so I'll give you one hint: It's not about a single object or idea. |
@ Faggotory Fun: You got it right! ^^
I like your haiku, but, isn't the second line supposed to be seven syllables? o.o @ Shtona: You have succeeded at making it difficult... I'm probably going to get this WAY off. >.< My brain's frying... D8 Uhhhh... Is it from the Moon's POV, talking about Earth and.... hum. The 'others' it refers to... would one be the sun...? Gah, I'm sorta bad at this. =.= Nice poem you wrote~ :3 Rising, falling, Chanting, calling, Melodies float along, Sighing, Crying, Twisting, persisting, Notes follow the song. |
I see a love song. the melodies and persitant calling
If each moonlite teardrop falls without a thought Do we think how which it falls? If the apple hits the ground, Then why did it come down? Without a thought, without a sound It just begins to act. Like it is only but a force, acting only to react. |
I think teh poem is trying to challenge people to notice things they don't normal do. About how much of life we see but never really think about.
If you can kill two birds with one stone, what does that say about you? Are you cunning like a fox's smile or simply the snake that hides beneath the shadows. Should pride be in the way we hurt, scam and steal. Is it too late for us to feel. Are we too weak to get hurt ourselves. Are we too strong to let things go. |
I thought it described, and or asked, if you are outgoing, and
full of wit and smarts, or are you shy and don't show it. Myy turn. The rose petals fall as the breeze closes in.. The rose becomes trapped. They cannot move. Only the blowing wind is moving them.. Pushing forward isn't working, yet pushing back works increasingly. Yet, when a woman falls, and the man comes in, The woman becomes trapped. She cannot get out. Only his begging and pleading keep her there. Trying to go away isn't working, yet going forward displeases her, with only the man being happy. |
I think this sounds like a bad relationship. with roses and references to love.
It is sliding now above the horizon, Silver bright it glows. Like a hanging disk, or drop of light She glids amoung her diamonds. Some howl in song to praise her, but she has no ears to hear. Up the horizon, through the sea she greets her sister, then goes back to rest does she. |
I'm gonna say the moon, or mother moon and her diamonds are the stars, the howling songs are the wolves, she greets her sister the sun then goes to rest as day approaches.
Your music calls to me in the crisp cool air of the night though I can barely hear it.... to be near it... seams right your lilting flutes and haunting songs... make me dream of dancing the whole night long sometimes I can barely sleep, for the ache of wanting you most nights I can only dream of what you kind can do and sincerely I thank you, for giving me such sight and once again I thank you for this enchanted night |
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@ Kat Dakuu: Y'know, that's a snazzy way to look at that poem, I like how you interpreted it. When I originally wrote it, it was supposed to be about singing. Though, seeing it as a love song is rather interesting.
@ AcidReyne: Did you write the poem? Because, I think we're supposed to use poems written by ourselves. Also, I suggest next time leaving the title out, as it gives away the topic and doesn't give the next person the fun of interpreting it. Sorry if I sound rude. So, seeing as the title is 'Life of a Teenager' I'm guessing it's probably a poem discussing ups and downs of being an adolescent and various things to avoid, who to be careful of, and such advice. ---------------- The minute it entered their bodies, A boy's fate was done and set, With the shiny car keys, Great force the boy has met, Coming home from parties, A boy's fate Death did get. |
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Two a.m. the body puts on fishnets thigh highs, knee-hight boots. the senses choke on too much powdered foundation caked on and sour flowery perfume wishing to be met with cheap cologne the mind wanders slick sidewalks yellow reflections of near empty city and waits to hear the honking horn. All so that the heart can mimic a beat. |
i think it's about a prostitute. "...And waits to hear the honking horn." and the description on the clothes first intales a runaway goth girl,but then the line about waiting to hear a horn intales that she's a prostitute..............k,here's mine..
Scared to death,waiting for it to stop, Just waiting for her attaker's rage to pop. The slick sidewalk beneith her,blood all around. She waits in pain to be found. Her attaker has gone,leaving her alone. To weak to get up and cold to the bone, The rain pours down on her,as lights flash just before her eyes. She cries and cries for help,but no one hears,and yet,still she cries... All she did,was walk home alone,now she waits for death to give her a last kiss. Now she thinks of what she will miss. 15 and very happy,now,she lies on the sidewalk bleeding. Everything is black then,and now sweat is beading... Beading everywhere... In the hospital,she is revived, As she opens her eyes,everyone has sighed. Life has been given to her again,her attacker behind bars. She realizes that life is all ours. i just realized,that the meaning of this poem is really hard to figure out......:sweat: |
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