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Old 04-22-2007, 08:18 PM

I wrote these three poems two years ago. They are some of my favorites, and I thought that I would share them with all of you. Please feel free to offer constructive criticism and suggestions. They are amateur work and by no means perfect. ^^ I have posted two other poems in this forum, Design of Fire, and an Untitled piece if you would like to read/comment more of my work.

Questioning Stars

one star
a new star
an evil star
a sad star
placed in the sky
as punishment
for some grand mishap
twinkling miserably
what did you do
to deserve such a sentence
of shining
forever
to guide those below
and keep them from making
the same


You Can’t Stop Me

when I am old
I will run
as quickly as I can
outside
and plop down on the ground
I will pull out
every blade of grass
one at a time
in a circle around myself
I will shout
and laugh
and sing
and dance
and mourn the grass
that I ripped
to form my
fairy ring
and I will
call to the birds
“Catch me if you can”
and fly on wings
of stemmed glory
that are so black they are blue
to the world of my own
in my yard
in my seat
in the dirt
and glue every blade
back in place


Fall on Mute

the only light
is that of the television
the only sound
is on mute
the only life
is transfixed by the shadows
cast by the changing, flickering glow
watching figures leap about
taking over small things and big things
then leaping back to where they came from
and that eerie glow of the television on mute
and a sleepwalker’s fall

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Old 04-22-2007, 08:38 PM

Eep! >.<
Thos poems have the same thoughts of mine as the others! XD
I love how you can express your feelings in such a beautiful way.

 


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