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Old 05-08-2007, 09:40 PM

Yeah... I'll just make one thing to avoid me making oodles of pages for all of my poems.



False Reflections

You see the person put before you
But I am different every day
I turned my back on who I was long ago
Now, I am whoever you want me to be

This mask I wear is ever changing
Like I mirror, I reflect whatever I see
Shattered glass, reflecting many images at once
Depending on whose eyes gaze upon me

I am a piece with no real place
Yet you can fit me anywhere in the puzzle
My mold can change
I can be too easily forced
To adjust to my surroundings

Fragile words have lulled your trust
How many have you believed?
Anymore, I don’t even have an idea
How many of the words I say are true

One minute I am made for you
And only for you
Later I am someone else
Some one you never knew

Open your eyes
And look beyond your denial
See past my false reflections
And look into the face of the true me

Can you still love me as you did before?


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Old 05-10-2007, 03:42 PM

Well written,well done :!:

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Old 05-18-2007, 12:41 AM

Shadows

How often have I stood beside you,
When you did not see?
How often have I spoken to you,
When you have not replied?
Have I simply become your shadow,
Forever following, yet rarely seen?

I have never felt so alone in my life
Yet, I am surrounded by people
How many of them know I'm there?
Can't you at least think of me long enough
To give me a wave? A smile? Anything?
I do not want to be a shadow

I fear that I have been forgotten.
Does that mean that I am dead?
But I still have a pulse, I still breath
Maybe in this sense I am not truly dead
Only dead to the world
In that case, I will walk away

Why are you stopping me?
Do you not want me to go?
Shall I simply stand there and be ignored?
Tell me,
Why am I loved only when I'm gone?
What reason do I have to remain here?

I see… Then perhaps I am not a shadow
But an imaginary friend
Someone whom you only speak to
When no one else is around
An echo from your childhood
Am I supposed to be content with that?

I suppose I must be…
For I shall never receive anything more, it seems.
At least now I know how my shadow must feel
I will have to afford her more attention from now on.
We can have fun together.
I may walk beside you,
But my shadow is the only one who walks beside me…

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Old 05-18-2007, 01:00 AM

Hands of Time

Where did time begin?
What was the start of it all?
What drives the hands of time forward?
Why never back?

Every choice ever made
Affects the never ending flow of time
How many new paths have been created?
How many possible futures have been destroyed?

We all know of history,
Time already passed, events set in stone
But what of the future?
It is still like clay
Taking whatever shape it is molded into

How can you be certain that the design you’re creating
Is the way that you really want your future to develop?
For once done, it is history
And time flows on for infinity

But… Does not Infinity run both ways?
After all, we have seen history repeat itself many times.
However, the hands of time do not flow in circles
Nor can they simply follow a single unwavering path

Remember how the choices you make
Affect the shape of time’s mold
Humanity continues to repeat its mistakes
That is the only reason that time ever flows in circles
The hands of time drive themselves forward
However, we are the ones behind the wheel

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Old 05-20-2007, 05:46 AM

I adore the words you use.
I like how it flows.
I love the stanzas.
It's well rounded and really don't steer off of the path like a lot of people do.
I really like them... a lot.
Wonderful Job, keep writing.

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Old 05-22-2007, 08:44 PM

Thank you. ^^
(Err... I need to keep a better eye on my comments.)

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Old 05-23-2007, 10:28 PM


Silent Listener


All around I hear them
Problems, worries, fears
I listen in silence
My heart goes out to them all

They scream
I cry
They laugh
I smile

Then a question asked of me
A somber plea for help
I tell all that I know
They care nothing for what I say

My turn to speak
My mind churns with thoughts
No one ever hears
My voice falls upon deaf ears

Over and over again
I am told all I wish not to hear
Expectation met
I am still listening

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Old 05-24-2007, 02:18 AM

Your poems are beautiful.
They flow nicely together.
I noticed you use free-verse. Why do you use it so much? Is it just because you like it better or you just didn't notice?

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Old 05-24-2007, 06:14 PM

I like writing free verse.
It's easier for me to do since I'm not having to worry about what word goes where so much.
And I am not so great at rhyming. ^^;

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Old 05-26-2007, 01:52 AM

Sorry i posted these poems on another topic but thought i would post it here as well. i hope you dont mind.

Death

Looking on ever so piercing gaze,
Eyes that stab through your soul.
Waiting in thee unseen,
still as statues lay
a hunger for souls that time will give
Each day once lived
passes on, but still he waits.
A cold air has passed,
eyes gaze down upon thy lifeless shell
sleep for eternity......
As worms feast on thy flesh he moves
creeping slowly toward thy resting place
he reaches out for you.
With your soul you must pay
for your life lived each day.......
now has ended.

Lost To Love

A life so lost and bleak,
A soul with no reason to be.
Whats this that thy seek
A feeling that so has lost from memory
A dream that yet to touch reality.
A quest for this feeling
A search for the illusive
Has left me inconclusive.

As days have passed, many lives have been lost
Lives all searching for this feeling
This emotion that brings us meaning
True love is what i seek.

At last my quest has ended...

I have found heavens lost angel
Tangled in despair, my life im willing to share
For it is you Rebecca that made my dreams come true
So this poem is to thank you
For all you have done...

hope you like it ; ;

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Old 05-26-2007, 11:09 PM

They're very nice, Rai. ^^

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Old 05-27-2007, 12:59 AM

Thank you, i hope to have more when i am in a writing mood, im not a writer in anyway... these were brought on by strong emotions ; ; maybe soon i will write something else.

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Old 05-27-2007, 04:45 AM

Well, when you do, feel free to post them here. ^^

I just write and see whatever comes out. Half of my stuff is just a bunch of jumbled thoughts mixed with a keyboard.

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Old 05-28-2007, 03:17 PM

The floor is dampend by each trickle.
The room filling with sounds takeing each breath as it's own.
The moon glimmers endlessly search for a smile.
Not a wind in the dark can break this feeling.
The feeling of sorrow, grief and misundertsnading will take you away from the world.
Mid-night passes slowly with each tick of the everlasting clock.
Each day passes slower and slower.
because only time can mend a broken heart.
not only can it mend that sadness inside it helps regain your courage.
With each passing hour rember every heart can be saved from internal sadness.

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Old 05-28-2007, 05:31 PM


Nice, KiraKira. ^^

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Old 05-28-2007, 08:16 PM

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Originally Posted by Cyndel

Nice, KiraKira. ^^

You really think it's that good? Wow thanks a bunch, anyone want to see more?

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Old 05-28-2007, 10:19 PM


Um... Sure. ^^

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Old 06-12-2007, 04:37 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by kiarakiara
The floor is dampend by each trickle.
The room filling with sounds takeing each breath as it's own.
The moon glimmers endlessly search for a smile.
Not a wind in the dark can break this feeling.
The feeling of sorrow, grief and misundertsnading will take you away from the world.
Mid-night passes slowly with each tick of the everlasting clock.
Each day passes slower and slower.
because only time can mend a broken heart.
not only can it mend that sadness inside it helps regain your courage.
With each passing hour rember every heart can be saved from internal sadness.
Nice. too bad it's so sad ; ; i guess we all tend to be more inspired to write when we are emotional. then again . . poetry is about emotions i guess ^^
i hope time has healed you pain... because time sure as hell feels it need not to speed things up for me lmao

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Old 06-12-2007, 05:11 PM


XD
Time hates humanity. It likes being slow and painful.

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Old 06-12-2007, 05:15 PM

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Originally Posted by Cyndel

XD
Time hates humanity. It likes being slow and painful.
yar, time hates me thats for sure ^^ but it even out... because i hate it as well *beats time with a stick*

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Old 06-12-2007, 05:21 PM


Haha. XD
I'd love to do that. >.>
It goes too fast for me. I'm already almost 18 D:
I have a peter pan complex. XD I like being a kid. lol

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Old 06-12-2007, 05:25 PM

O.O lol lucky you . . . lol almost 18 har har times still so sweet when you're 18 ; ; meh im teh old ... and time moves so slow -_- if it moves at all.

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Old 06-12-2007, 05:45 PM


lol yeah. ^^;
Well, about all I get done is RPing, and I stay home all the time doing nothing but living on the internet, so yeah... ^^;
The day's over before I even realize it. lol

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Old 06-12-2007, 05:54 PM

yar, i spend all my time online too, but i spend it well ^^

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Old 06-12-2007, 05:59 PM


lol yep. Hey, writing gets up my English skills. XD
Or kills them. >.> One of the two. lol
I think all of the red and green confetti in the word document is just my crappy typing skills more than spelling errors. lol

 


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