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Old 05-30-2007, 07:45 AM

Oh God this was so random. Don't critique I know it's aweful >.>


  • you'r my friend and that is true,
    but the gift was given from me to you.
    we went thru moments that were good and bad,
    even moments that were happy and sad.
    you suported me when i was in tears,
    we stuck together when we were in fear,

    its really sad that it had to be this way,
    but it has reached its very last day.
    miles away cant keep us apart,
    'cause you'll always be in my heart.


    Always remember to forget
    The things that made you sad
    But never forget to remember
    The things that made you glad.

    Always remember to forget
    The friends that proved untrue.
    But don't forget to remember
    Those that have stuck by you.

    Always remember to forget
    The troubles that have passed away.
    But never forget to remember
    The blessings that come each day.


    When troubles come your soul to try,
    You love the friend who just stands by.
    Perhaps there's nothing she can do,
    The thing is strictly up to you.

    For there are troubles all your own,
    And paths the soul must tread alone.
    Times when love can't smooth the road,
    Nor friendship lift the heavy load.

    But just to feel you have a friend,
    Who will stand by until the end.
    Whose sympathy through all endures,
    Whose warm handclasp is always yours.

    It helps somehow to pull you through,
    Although there's nothing she can do.
    And so with fervent heart we cry,
    God Bless the friend who just stands by.



    A friend is somebody
    Who knows you and likes you
    Exactly the way that you are.

    Someone who's special
    And so close in thought
    That no distance can ever seem far.

    A friend understands you
    Without any words,
    Stands by you
    When nothing goes right.

    And willingly talks
    Over problems with you
    Till they somehow
    Just vanish from sight.

    And whether you're neighbors
    Or live miles apart,
    A word from a friend gives a lift
    To your heart and spirit.

    That shows you once more
    Why friendship is life's dearest gift!


    Too often we don't realize
    What we have until it is gone
    Too often we wait too late to say
    "I'm sorry - I was wrong."

    Sometimes it seems we hurt the ones
    We hold dearest to our hearts
    And we allow foolish things
    To tear our lives apart.

    Far too many times we let
    Unimportant things into our minds
    And then it's usually too late
    To see what made us blind.

    So be sure that you let people know
    How much they mean to you
    Take that time to say the words
    Before your time is through.

    Be sure that you appreciate
    Everything you've got
    And be thankful for the little things
    in life that mean a lot.

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Old 05-30-2007, 11:03 PM

i think it is very good. i think you should make it bigger though. i can hardly see it. it is much better than any thing i wrote :oops:

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Old 05-30-2007, 11:06 PM

are you going to write more poems? if you do can you send it to me?

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Old 05-31-2007, 02:17 AM

Yeah I probably will.
I have some, I'm just a little shame to post them xD

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Old 05-31-2007, 02:20 AM

everyone says life is to short

but how short is it really?

i mean we never know when it will end

but in that troublesome thought we can find beauty

because not knowing when the end will come

makes every day that much more important

makes every flower that much more beautiful

makes every relationship that much more meaningful

makes every love that much more deeper

for to long has fear ruled the decisions people make

for me i have decided not to let fear rule my life

because when i get to the end of my life i want to look back on it

and say that i had no regrets

and lived every day to its fullest.

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Old 05-31-2007, 06:09 PM

Would you please set the font size a little bigger and use some darker colors? I'm getting an headache of this font...
But for as far as I've read them, they're quite good. :)

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Old 06-10-2007, 02:57 AM

  • What happened to especially in the month of June?
    I can learn a lot of things from the flowers?
    Is there a wealth of happiness and romance?
    Should I wait a little bit longer?
    Or must I find my golden afternoon?
    Where bread-and-butterflies kiss the tulips
    And the sun is like a toy balloon.
    Are there are get up in the morning glories,
    And are there dizzy daffodils on the hillside?
    Do the Tiger lilies love the dandelions?
    And are there dog and caterpillars and a copper centipede,
    Where the lazy daisies love the very peaceful life they lead?
    In my golden afternoon?

 


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