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mekado
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06-20-2007, 09:24 PM
Okay so I'm taking a break from stories to write poems for a little bit.. Although stories are fun they do hurt my brain after awhile. So here we go!
Salvation
A broken heart, shattered lives and shattered thoughts.
Broken and unbleeding searching for my salvation.
Hearing angels but seeing devils from the past.
Bone upon stone, blood in sweat working to my salvation.
How will I know it? Where could I find this place of rest?
Flesh returning to the earth a remembrance unkind.
Stone of granite, makes it permanent.
I wonder did he find his salvation?
Or was he mine?
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mekado
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06-20-2007, 09:30 PM
How can I leave you?
Can I ever be free from your spell?
I love you, please let me stay with you.
Save the hexs, save the curses.
I'll stay here with you.
I love you.
Spellbound in love with you.
Never showing disloyalty.
Loyal servant to the end, I love you.
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Solin
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06-20-2007, 10:03 PM
I really liked these two. They're a little dark, like usual, but I like them. ^^
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Hikari963
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06-22-2007, 01:04 AM
nice poems, how did u think of those two poems :D
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c a n d i i
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06-25-2007, 02:47 AM
I can never write poems. Yours are really good ones. :)
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mekado
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06-28-2007, 08:15 PM
I didn't expect people to read and like my stuff thank you for posting on my thread. The inspiration for my work mainly comes from how I feel or a place I have seen or been too. It really helps me to relax and drink some hot tea. Again thank you for every comment ^^.
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mekado
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09-05-2007, 06:39 PM
Heart on mend, cry not thy tears,
Hence smile of joy for love is nigh
fair maid weep not.
Heart on mend, thy smile brings joy,
Sun smiles in thy grace
and gods do bow before thee.
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mekado
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09-05-2007, 07:37 PM
Golden ball oh soaring up to the sky.
You almost seem to touch the very swallows as they fly.
Way above the house tops til you tangle with trees happy little child playing catch with the brezze. Sailing high I can not see you. down to the path where you bounce away.
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