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Old 09-27-2007, 04:37 AM

I wrote this last year, when I was feeling emo-ish, so it's kinda emo-ish >>;
I got alot of compliments, so I decided to post it here.
Well, here goes nothing^^;;

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A tragic love song that echos through the mountains and sings with the voice of the rain, blowing softly through the hearts of many.

It makes its way to the deepest parts of the oceans and awakens the sleeping mermaid whos heart is filled with tears.

Whispers of sorrow in her ears, splinters of tragedy in her heart, seeing the sadness in her eyes, she may not heal.

Doubting her pain and acting untouched, the storms of heartbreak still linger in her head, as she swims on alone.

The face of a lost soul, the soul of a lonesome lover, the loneliness of being abandoned, the abandonment.

Swords of heartache pierce through her heart, touching every nerve, leaving no fragment of hope inside.

Beside herself lay the only hope she sees: a dull blade, a black handle, inscriptions of fate.

Carelessness of heartbreak, does he know what he's done?, thoughts of parting drift.

Hurt love, dimmed eyes, lost passion, scattered emotions, in a wounded mind.

Fingers slide across the handle, grasping the pain in her heart tightly.

Remains of the love that once was are no more, leaving silence.

Kind words that once had feeling hold meaning no longer.

With one small stroke the pain is forever ended.

Eternal sleep bestowed by her last hope.

Letting go of reality and its cruelty.

Phobia of solitude diminishes.

One last breath whispers.

Voice of soft despair.

Final declaraion.

I love you.

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Old 09-27-2007, 07:06 PM

thats amasing!!

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Old 09-27-2007, 08:05 PM

Thank you very much <3
Even though it's old and emo-ish, I still love it x3

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Old 09-27-2007, 10:06 PM

its better then any/all of my pomes

 


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