Names

Girls,ladys,women and females
These are names that we are called, but aren't we all humans
We have two hands,feet,eyes, and ears
We are humans
We need to be treated like humans
We need to be equal to men
Everywere we are
Not just some here and there
We are humans
So lets all be equal



(sorry if there are miss spelled words)

please please please tell me what you think!!Even if its not good i whant to know what you think!! :D :D

First there’s some mechanical stuff:
A comma (,) is followed by a space.
Lady plural is ladies.
Everywhere

Then I’m not a fan of free verse, so I’m going to call my opinions otherwise invalid.

thanks for your obinion it helps