I just wanted to find a place to post all of my poetry.
It's all really depressing but i like it.

Darkness swarms around me
Pulling me down to the never ending darkness
Crimson rain alls around me
I can't see it but i can feel and smell it.
Blinded by my hate and rage
An inward war of light and darkness wages
My one true light is fading
My emotions locked away
Sealed away in my pandoras box.
I listen noo to the will of the darkness
I am at his beck and call
A soilder in the war of evil's reign
I'm a puppet of to the darkness
I feel nothing but hate and rage
Every day lttle by little my humanity is lost
I've become a part of the darkness
Lost forever
Never to be found





Guardian Angel

My heart is beating
Driving me insane
a picture comes to mind
a vision of you

Who are you
Where are you
So many questions left unanswered
Keys to doors long forgeten

Please answer me
My time is almost up
The world is going dark
As my body becomes cold.

My soul is leaving it's confines
I wish i had more time
To see you once again
I've closed my eyes and left this world

I wished you were there
Wondered who you were
Now i know
My Guardian Angel



This was the first poem i ever wrote.
It's actually written from a childhood experience that no one beleives happened but i can vividly remember.




Lost

I'm lost
and can't be found.
I cry
But you will never see the tears.
I ask for help
But you will never hear the words.
I wish to be found
But you will never find me.
I ask you why
But you don't hear me.
I call your name
But i know you won't listen.
I sit in the darkness
Lost from the light forever.
My mind grows numb
As my body grows cold.
The cold metal knife lays by my side
Coverd in my crimson blood
The crimson liquid flowing from my wrists.
How did it come to this?
Why did i do this?
I lost my reason
I lost my mind
I lost my heart
All to the darkness.
I've let go of it all
Too lost to be found.

I don't remember why i wrote this one but it kind of explains how i feel on a daily basis sometimes.

i still love your writing even though it makes me sad Max..

Threads of time


Bound by time
Never to end
A life destroyed.
The threads of time
destroy the soul.
She watches the never ending cycle of destruction
Tirerd from crying
The crimson blood flows
The Rain never ends
Slowly forming tears
Are all she has left.
She hears the screams of those in pain
She watches her closest friend
She hears him scream
As he falls down
Cold and lifeless
Another corpse added to the battle field.
She never told him
how much loved him
And now he is never to return
His soul is taken
Drawn to the world beyond.
The threads of time are torture to her.
She is not to die
But watch the life leaving
She holds strong to her feelings
And lets the tears flow
She feels the pain of loss
Time never ends.
She watches as the world
Falls into chaos
Never being able
To do anything.
She prays that it may end
But her prayers are never answered.
SHe never wanted this
But is stuck between worlds
Never to return
Never to see the light
Her eyes become lifeless
Though she still lives
Her body becomes weak
She stares at the body of her beloved friend.
She spends an eternity waiting for him
To return to her again.
She watches as more fall
She see's the crimson blood flow from their bodies
She will never stop watching
She will never stop crying
This war will never end
This war between the worlds.
She can't help but cry
She misses her friends
Though she can't return
The world is cruel
But the threads of time are even worse.
The crys of those in pain
The screams of those dying
She cannot stop the tears from flowing
No matter how hard she tries.
The threads of time wilol not releasse her.

Edit:
HI MIRIAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I know my writting is really depressing.
But i love it

wow..thats really poweful max. so pretty and sad...

I wrote that a long time ago Lea.
I had my english teacher in 9th grade editi it
but i mostly posted the original





The pain, the hate, the fear
Surrounding everything around me
The world falls into chaos
Drowning in sorrow

Bring to me the reason
For life and take the life
That took another

Bring your mind out of a peaceful state
Aand take a look at reality
Never underestimate the power fate has

Take the reality and change it
Feelings come forward and surround my life
Drawing me to death

The world seems to end
and never begin again
Bet everything has a begining.


If anyone has an idea for a title for this one i would greatly appreciate the idea.

I wrote this to prove that poetry comes naturally to me.
I think i write this in about 3 minutes.

another beautifully written poem..you really should have entered that poetry contest. your poem is way better than my "your brooding dark eyes send shivers down my spine" stuff..