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Old 10-08-2007, 10:51 PM

I wrote this for a friend who died in a car crash recently. I found writeing was the only way to keep me from falling apart.

Tied up in ribbons
Torn up in knots
Alone in the darkness
Alone in the Light

We Wonder why
death grips the young
we wonder why
he never takes the strong

Fallen angels
from a promised land
on shattered wings
on broken sands
just trying to go home again

Some say my wings are white
so large and yet so pure
I hate these wings so light
that leave me so unsure

I say these wings are red
that leave me oh so cold
with all the things unsaid
and fears are all along

Fallen angels
from a promised land
on shattered wings
on broken sands
just trying to go home again

Death takes our angels
and we feel the pain
another angel
and the tears, they fall again

This time we cry
with many fears
they succeeded this time
so no more tears

Taking Angels
from the fallen lands
on mended wings
on crystal sands
and lead them home again

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Old 10-08-2007, 11:01 PM

Annnnd the next one

Shadows
on a frozen lake
remind me
of what we had

tears they fall
like raindrops
to a shadow hall
forever in a day

Reminding me
of the past long lost
of a past
we once shared

But I know
you'll never return
and so I sit here
all alone

staring
at the cold
and lonesome stone
where you now lay

death
he can be so cruel
taking all we love
away so far away

These tears
they will not pass
and so I will
forever wait...for you

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Old 10-08-2007, 11:13 PM

oh my! Its another!((the origonal version of the first one))

Tied up in ribbons
torn up in knots
lost in the darkness
born with one wing

did you ever wonder
did you ever suffer
from this wingless shoulder
this darkened holder

They say my wings are white
so large and yet so pure
I hate these wings so bright
that leave me so unsure

They tell me that I soar
with this wings of mine
these wings so white in color
so much purer with time

Did they they never think
that these wings bring not but sorrow
did they never know
these wings are all but borrowed

Some day you'll understand
why its you with just one wing
someday you'll finely know
why its me with larger wings

These wings of mine oh angel
these wings where never mine
someday you'll find the answer
and you'll know
these wings are yours

Ayreiya
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Old 10-08-2007, 11:23 PM

Those are really pretty.
I like the concept and the title.
very Very pretty.

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Old 10-08-2007, 11:30 PM

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Originally Posted by Ayreiya
Those are really pretty.
I like the concept and the title.
very Very pretty.
Thank you very much dear^^

 


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