This is a short poetry/story composition by me made just on the spot right now. With a simple topic from a family member:

The toast was settled across the table,
Upon the fiesta colored plates,
You get a bottle of jam,
From your supply in the plywood creates,
You delicately spread your jam just like butter,
And then all of a sudden your mouth seems to utter,
"Why is this good why is this great,
something so simple could be so complete,
what else is missing from this paired solo,
some peanut butter that was stored in the Tupperware bowl."

Your love brings the joy to spread on each other,
When you spread the jam knife with the peanut butter,
They cry with joy, create something new
just like life
but just completely scrumptious.

-By Katie n_n
critique appreciated in all forms

Softly blowing winds
Across the ocean blue
I linger in the doorway
Of the cottage on the cliff.
Singing a soft sweet melody
That i rememeber from my childhood
A song of waters blue
And winds softly blowing.


Sorry had to post it
Spontaneous spur of the moment thing.
It was kinda like yours but different topic.

n_n
it's okay
it's burtifull!
yay *claps hands*

you can post anything as long as it's appropriate

Thank you

your welcome n_n too bad menusha doesnt have guilds yet. I can't wait. if they do. actually they should call them clubs. it would be fun having a poetry one. n_n

Hahaha, I liked it. That was good =)

Thank you./ n_n

trees swaying in the breeze...
a soft sun upon us both...
do you remember that day?
do you still feel that sun like i do?
i guess you don't...
you don't care...
you hurt me, and made me cry...
so now i guess this is goodbye.

:'( beautiful beautiful!!!!! again again!!! oh that was so touching. there should be a poetry club!