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Old 10-10-2007, 12:23 PM

I love the feeling of arms around my waist
My own around someones neck.
My head upon their soft chest,
Only to listen to an everlasting heartbeat.

When I open my teary eyes
I see that the arms around me were my duvet
My own arms squeezed around a teddybear
My head upon my wet cried pillow
and the everlasting heartbeat was my own lonely heart
Screaming for someone to love.

Fin
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I'm not that good in English poetry, ah well here's my shot. It's poetry like, please give some comments.

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Old 10-10-2007, 02:12 PM

I totally get this.
I want the same stuff.

 


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