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Old 10-11-2007, 06:44 PM

JUST THINK

Just think about it,
When you say you’re bored,
There are people literally dieing of boredom

Just Think,
When You Think Life Is Crap,
Think Of What Its Like For other People,
Living sometimes outside,
No food, water, or anything of value,
Except their lives,
Meaningless to us,
But valued by them,
Or hated as most things are.

Just Think,
When You’re Bullied,
Its just because they are lonely,
Upset too 'good' to handle it,
Too immersed in anger and hate,
They bully,
But in the end it is them who are bullied.

Now thinking about this I say,
Enjoy Your Life,
Value and Treasure it,
Live life To It's Full,
For It Might not last forever,
Don't Let Other Peoples Suffering,
Be In Vain,
Help If You Can.


We Are Humans,
After All,
Aren’t we?

Nathan Powell
(Aged 15)
11/10/07

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Old 10-11-2007, 06:47 PM

Awwww that is so sweet Nathan *huggles* I loved it
Well done keep writing!!!!

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Old 10-11-2007, 07:20 PM

Trying

Life is hard we know it,
You try so hard to do something right,
And eventually it turns up its just another useless idea,
But what would life be without it?
Do you want it perfect?

Our Minds are learning machines,
If we fail at something,
We learn,
Everybody can do it,
There are no exceptions,
Not even people with learning disorders,
They still learn,
Or they would be in a heap on the floor.

So when you fail,
Say at getting a job,
Or with a piece of work,
Why don’t you try again?
Don’t be like the other people,
Those that just give in,
Life is more than that,
We are not made to be miserable,
We were given intelligence,

Use it,
Make something of yourself,
One day you’ll think of something amazing,
Just because you’re young,
Doesn’t mean your stupid.

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Old 10-11-2007, 07:22 PM

very true =) I liked this one too <3

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Old 10-11-2007, 10:29 PM


Roses are red,
oh how they look pretty,
but how deceiving they can be,
just like a rose bush,
looks pretty,
has spines on,
hurts to touch,
and then you dont see it as you did,
it becomes evil,
not pretty,
be deceptive instead of nice.

How related is this,
to life as we know it?
on the surface,
things can look ok,
but you never know,
there could be allot,
going on you don't know,
suddenly something breaks,
then you wonder,
what ever happened,
he looked so good?

the truth is,
things can be hidden,
stored away with a false image,
so you be careful,
you could get stung,
life inst simple,
like people believe.

Nathan Powell
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Old 10-11-2007, 10:37 PM

I love your writing it has so much meaning and truth:)

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Old 10-12-2007, 03:18 PM

aww. thanks!

its good to be appreciated, I'm actually not a very good writer but that shows over wise, its funny isnt it?

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Old 10-12-2007, 09:24 PM

Life

Life is crap isnt it?
or boring to be precise,
You Wake Up,
Go to school/work,
Come Home,
Eat, Sleep

The Cycle Continues,
and continues,
in a never ending cycle.

On Tv,
You see people ready to die,
doing all these things,
you think,
wish i could do that,
why dont you go do something amazing?

Life is very Short,
live every day as your last,
and when your on your death bed,
you can say,
i did something with my life,
i'm glad i made a difference.

Nathan Powell (aged 15)
12/10/07

 


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