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Old 10-11-2007, 11:14 PM

I felt like sharing a couple of my poems i wrote a few years ago. Please tell me what you think! im very proud of them!! XD


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Because

This thing isn't a game i say,
This world isn't a new,
This place isn't just made up,
Take this as a clue,
I played the game of feelings,
I played the game of truth,
I played the game of life or death,
I played this game with you,
I say that this wasn't a game,
When actually i felt it was,
Now i feel a lot of shame,
And that is just because...

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A Dream

I dream of how the world keeps turning,
I dream of the trees that stand so tall,
I dream of young hearted children,
And the orange leaves in the fall,
I dream of fluffy clouds in the sky,
I dream of shadows hiding from the light,
I dream of the sunrise and sundown,
And how birds can be so free in flight,
I dream of a man in my life,
I dream of his hand on mine,
I dream of his kiss so soft,
But all of this takes time
A dream is so beautiful,
A dream is so simple and free,
A dream is so special,
It's someone's wish to be...

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Old 10-11-2007, 11:18 PM

There’s a literature fourm and a subfourm for poetry. You can find it here

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Old 10-11-2007, 11:20 PM

  • There's a special forum on Mene called Literature spot, I believe there is a subforum there especially for poems. Please take the time to check out other forums than just the General discussions, we have a specific forum for pretty much everything. :]

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Old 10-11-2007, 11:21 PM


  • Yup, wrong forum, I see other people have helped you find you're way. -nod-

 


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