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Old 10-12-2007, 12:47 AM

I'll be down here missing you-


The warmth of your touch.
I love you so very much.
I see you lying in that coffin deep asleep.
When i pass by,I feel more and more sad,i cry.

Everyday i ask;
Why God,why her?
Until i realize it's no use cry.
Your in a better place looking up on this day.
Looking down to your daughter's futures,
hoping for the best.

That day that cancer hit you,
our hearts just broke in pain.
We felt so sorrow, but we still had hope.
I wanted to do something,for a solution,i grope.

I kneel down with a cross on my arms,
I think, "God,please do not let her suffer with harm".
2 Years has passed since the day of news,
we thought you were going to make it through.

But then the day came when it hit once again,
the docter told me she was gonna be ok,he feigned.
But then i suddenly hear the words of truth,
shes gone,she passed.
I did not pursue to beleive,
but i can see;
The look in my fathers eyes,
he crys inside.

Her borrowed time,
has gone by.
So please God,
I trust you to take good care of her.
I love you my aunt,I spur in that.

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Old 10-12-2007, 12:50 AM

I really like it... Not only because its about a special somebody, but its truly beautiful. I'm sorry about your aunt.. I know what its like to lose close family.

Its very well written and carried out, truly its very good.

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Old 10-12-2007, 12:53 AM

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Originally Posted by admonished nonsense
I really like it... Not only because its about a special somebody, but its truly beautiful. I'm sorry about your aunt.. I know what its like to lose close family.

Its very well written and carried out, truly its very good.

Thankyou.
:)

Yea and i really miss her right now.
I hope I get better soon.

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Old 10-15-2007, 10:30 PM

wow. that was beautiful *sob*. I know how it feels as well. my grandfather passed away a month ago. *sob*
This poem was truly beautiful

 


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