I guess since I've been only writting poetry for a little while, at least it feels like a little while, I'll consider myself an amateur. So on...Here I'll dropoff my poems for you to read and comment on.
Happy Reading!!

Sister Complex

1. I love my sister that I do
Not only her but my niece too
Then you tell me we’re just alike
That is something I can’t help but to dislike

5. I stood to be independent for a reason
Telling me this is just treason
The one thing I fought with all my might
Now I cry because I lost this fight

9. I’ll never regret my sister’s birth
This just got to be a sibling curse
I can’t stand this my mind is twisted
It has come to the time I must end this

13. Now I must overcome this situation
Because I’ am tired of all this damn confrontation
I know now that I’ am me and only me
The similarities are only what other people see

17. I can’t help the fact that we came from the same mother
I can’t help the fact we’ve been raised by the same others
Knowing who I’ am showed me what I was doing
With my newly found independence I’ll keep myself moving

A superly free writting poem. I did it out of boredom and didn't bother to follow many standards so it might sound weird.

“I’ am bored and finish!� I proclaimed
I’ am done and tired of a world that stays the same!
I shut down my computer and walk away
Next person to email me this again, they will pay.
Chain letter! Chain letter!
Light as a feather!
Send to 10 friends
And let a life of luxury begin!
Mother cooked dinner and daddy read the paper
Darn I’ am tired of the same old labor!
Left to school the same time as always
People still clearing the hallways
Why didn’t I do my homework?
Why Steven Burgs is still the same jerk?
I want, no I demand, difference
I’ll go home dye my hair and change my appearance
What a shock that will be had
I can see mom’s and pa’s face, red and mad
This time around I sent them emails
Luxury lived was truth, guess who’s in jail?

I wrote this one little bit ago. I use to be afraid of Alice in Wonderland, so I wrote a poem about it.

Off with there heads that fat queen yelled
Roses are red the cards had been dealed.
That bunny that always late
Singing that same song as if it was his fate
This made her small
That made her tall
Choose the right one Alice
Make them fairytale creatures be silence
My hurts I don't get this movie
That werid cat just through me
Please mom I beg of thee
Take this back to the rental I have nightmares when I sleep