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Old 10-13-2007, 02:11 AM

If I left will you love me
If I stay will you hate me
If I leave will you stay
If I stay will you leave
If I cry will you hit me
If I love will you shun me
If I bleed will you slap me
If I heal will you cut me
If you say yes why do you hate me
If you say no why do you love me
If I die will you laugh
If I live will you cry
If I'm hungry will you eat
If I'm thirsty will you drink
If I love you will you hate me
If I hate you will you love me
If you say no why do you love me
If you say yes why do you hate me

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Old 10-13-2007, 02:30 AM

Sorry, I don't really like it I feel that you didb't try and its missing something. But it's pretty good I am no good at poetry. 8 X

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Old 10-13-2007, 02:59 AM

Its good, but not the best I've heard. But i do encourage you to do more of this, you never know you might do a better one.

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Old 10-13-2007, 08:09 PM

It's alright but kind of strange i guess

 


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