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#1
Old 10-14-2007, 11:33 PM

~Leaves of Change~

Leaves of Summer fall
to the calm waters below
as Autumn draws near

My spirit rises
to the call of my loved one.
My Nobunaga

Take me to his arms.
The wind is like my sailboat.
Take me to my love.

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Old 10-14-2007, 11:34 PM

Waves in the Sand

Sitting, on the beach,
my beloved beside me,
I watch the sunrise.

Sun, soft on my face,
caressing my skin gently.
A kiss from the gods.

Kiss, warm and tender,
never any doubt of love.
May this never end.

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Old 10-14-2007, 11:35 PM

~My Beloved~

My love never fades.
I'd follow you anywhere.
You're my Beloved.

My love grows stronger
With every passing day.
Nothing can change that.

I write this for you
because I truly love you.
Please, never leave me.

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Old 10-14-2007, 11:39 PM

~Love~

He said he loves me.
The word was as clear as day.
One dream has come true.

I returned the love,
just as I will always do,
Because I love him.

Finally, that word.
It means oh so much to me.
And he has said it.

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#5
Old 10-15-2007, 06:26 AM

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~Leaves of Change~

Leaves of Summer fall
to the calm waters below
as Autumn draws near
I love this one. It's very traditional and soothing to the soul.

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Old 10-15-2007, 03:09 PM

these are very good and traditional. i should know. they are all very inspiring :D :D but, you're not allowed to post more than two times in a row ^_^

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#7
Old 10-15-2007, 10:10 PM

Wow your poems are so good. Keep up the great work.

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#8
Old 12-29-2007, 07:29 PM

~Snow Kisses~

Snow falls around me
And on my pale, fragile skin
Kisses from the gods.

Kisses from my love
Warm and tender, yet he's gone
But he'll be home soon.

Home is where I wait
Wait for my love to return
Till the day I die

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#9
Old 12-29-2007, 07:36 PM

And one about my favorite character!

Phoenix, my idol!
i wish to be just like you!
Screaming "Objection!"

Every long day
You prove people innocent
To eat one more night

(I want too post another one so badly....)

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Old 01-05-2008, 07:10 PM

i like your poems!

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Old 01-06-2008, 11:21 PM

I really liked snow kisses.

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#12
Old 02-12-2008, 08:59 PM

^o^ I'm so glad so many people like my haikus! *goes off to brainstorm on some more*

Hm....maybe I'll make a Valentine's Day one....

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#13
Old 02-12-2008, 09:00 PM

<3 Valentine <3

Love is in the air
More-so than ever before
It's Valentine's Day

A simple poem
For the one that I adore
And maybe some sweets

That one time of year
Nothing else matters to me
Except for your love

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#14
Old 02-14-2008, 06:51 AM

Haikus are the best! ^.^ And you're very, very good at them. I love Snow Kisses and the very first one, but they're all so grand and soothing.

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#15
Old 02-16-2008, 06:18 AM

Thank you so much! I'm going to try and write more soon.

 


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