This is just a poem I wrote, please tell me what you think of it, and if you would please rate it on a scale from 1 to 10. Thank you, please enjoy.

Falling

It will only last a few seconds before it's over.
It's a sensation that starts with a rush of adrenalin that flows through you, the wind beating at your face, and blowing through your hair.
As you open your eyes and see the the water coming closer with every passing moment.
Your mind pulls back long forgotten thoughts of sorrow, pain, misery, blood and the shame you tried to hide from the world.
It all comes flooding back to you as you open your eyes once again only to follow your heart all the way to rock bottom.
You take one last breath of air as go under.


But, it's not over, not yet.
You look up for the last time and all you see is the moon and stars shining above the surface, the only thing left to remind you of your meaningless existence.
Every breath you take becomes more waterlogged than the last.
The light above you soon dissipates as you continue to fall, with no intent on swimming back.
You close your eyes and the world goes black.


It's still not over, because you remember then sensation that came after your memories, but before you hit rock bottom.
You remember that split second of pure peace. A second without the worries of life, the pain and sorrow it brings you, the moment where you left all behind on that bridge,


and you smile.


Because it's finally over.

i like it i think i'd rate it a 7 or 8