Always the one to speak true of love
Oh such wonderful love
Helping others to find the one their heart desires
Now my hearts the one to skip a beat thinking of a certain fellow
But I’ve grown too scared of my own true feelings ,So I push him to a distance
Backing away, causing confusion, wanting to break this bond between us.



Staring love straight in the face
Always promised to hold this day dear
Turning my back on the one thing I held above all
Weak at the knees I say my goodbyes

Growing more distance, he questions why.
His heart breaking in two, my lips open to speak but are lost for words
Wanting to make this pain go away, I turn to run, leaving him behind


Staring love straight in the face
Always promised to hold this day dear
Turning my back on the one thing I held above all
Weak at the knees I say my goodbyes


I feel breathless but surrounded by fresh air my lungs can’t seem to grasp.
The hopes and dreams that I had once been a vision now lost among the confusion
Gasping for a ounce of hope, thoughts of him come to mind
His smile, His kiss, His touch, His love


Staring love straight in the face
Always promised to hold this day dear
Finally ready to give my heart, I return
Weak at the knees I say my apologies

I know it still needs some work. Any advice or comments?

Staring love straight in the face
Always promised to hold this day dear
Turning my back on the one thing I held above all
Weak at the knees I say my goodbyes

I love your poem its so well written. Some small advice would to maybe write 'Always promised to hold dear this day' and maybe a little less wordy no offense. Just in my opinion, but its good without my advice. Keep up the good work.

Originally Posted by oHsoDemandinG

I love your poem its so well written. Some small advice would to maybe write 'Always promised to hold dear this day' and maybe a little less wordy no offense. Just in my opinion, but its good without my advice. Keep up the good work.

Oh well thank you very much. Yea i never liked the way that sounded, so i may change it to that. No offense taken, i get where you are coming from. ^^

Thank you so much for the advice.