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Old 10-21-2007, 05:43 PM

Cross my heart and hope to die
I am through with every lie
No more tears shall ever fall
To no one will I ever call
You can wish me to wither and burn
But forgiveness I shall never yearn
A promise deep inside my heart
One that divides me, sets me apart.
I wish upon a falling star
To take me somewhere far
A place that no one can see
Somewhere that I am just me
To end my suffering through each day
That is for what I truly pray
So to protect my dream I will never cry
I cross my heart and hope to die.

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Old 11-10-2007, 08:46 AM

I really like this poem!
very well written!

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Old 12-14-2007, 10:41 PM

Wow that is really good. It so much feeling. Keep up the great work.

 


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