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Old 12-10-2007, 12:53 AM

It takes my breath,
The light so bright.
For it is only,
A full moon tonight.

The diem white light,
shinning down.
The big silver circle,
does not make me frown.

I hear the howls,
Of the lost wolves.
And the shots,
Of humans tools.

A loud bang,
rings in my ears.
I drop to my knees,
my eyes full of tears.

I cant take the sound,
The cries of pain!
Thats all I here,
In this soft rain.

The trees,
they whisper.
The moons shine,
getting crisper.

The clouds flow over,
Then I see nothing.
I look to the woods,
And I hear a something.

Heaving breathing,
Loud steps.
Closer they come,
I have my regrets.

I stand,
and I stumble.
When I fell,
I felt my heart crumble.

My heart beating fast,
I try to stand.
My eyes,
they expand.

I hear one last noise,
The loud bang.
Then I'm nothing,
Lost and never the same.

oHsoDemandinG
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Old 12-13-2007, 11:53 PM

Good job, I like your poem a lot.

 


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