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Old 12-18-2007, 03:25 AM

The Downfall
Among them, a quiet specimen of
true beauty and a heart of honest love.
Her name did not fit her face or her grace,
But when it falls upon my tongue, a space
Within my heart screams out, “Ryan,” her name.
Her eyes are as bright as the red hot flame
Of lust that she ensues upon my soul.
More on her beauty that can take control,
Of a room and everyone in her view;
Her nose was turned-up and cheeks red in hue.
Her hair as dark as the onyx crystal
But her beauty was a loaded pistol.
She had many lovers, driven by lust,
Love, what she searched for, “it is a must.”

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Old 12-18-2007, 03:26 AM

Very good my love <3 It is awesome.
Do you write for classes or for fun. I wish I was as talented as you <3
Ps: 1st :3

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Old 12-18-2007, 03:30 AM

It was for a class.

It is a project.

I have two more to go.

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Old 02-17-2008, 09:04 AM

that is very good,thank you for sharing :)

 


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